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A very good morning to the director of IPG kampus ipoh, respectable lecturers and my fellow friends. I am glad to be given this golden chance to give a speech today and I would to talk about a concerning issue happen in our community lately. My speech tittle is 'Children's Freedom In Choosing Their Own Future'. Every child whether a boy or girl irrespective of age is unique and has value importance as a person with a right for their human dignity to be respected. It has a right to have a say in all decisions and matters that concern him or her, to be listened to and his or her opinion taken seriously
Freedom is meant by someone that can do whatever they want in their life but to children letting them decide their future is enough to be called as freedom. Lately, many parents not letting their children to decide their own future as they thought their children are still not ready no make such big decision. So some of them take an action by completely take over their children's life. Children need to obey with their parent 's choice without have chance to explain themselves. They want their children to be a pilot,doctor and any future occupations they want .Parents should bear in mind that no one know about children better than themself. They know what they good and bad in which parents may not know as well as them.They independent enough to make such dicision .So why not letting them choose?.
Ladies and gentleman,
On the other hand, all the children in this world have their own interest and forcing them doing what we like is not a good idea. What parents like does not mean children will like it too. For example if they had problem in studies,I am sure that they will not give their best effort on solving the particular problem .They tend to act like they don t care about it at all. As result their grade will fell down and their chance to be kicked out from university is high.This could lead them to stress and protest against parent. As a parents, it our duty to listen to the children and to consider their opinions when the decision. We should show them such a big support to encourage them in becoming a better humanbeings.Remember that children also have their own interest. So, children of today should be given freedom for their own benefits.
Apart from that, Maturity is the ability to think, speak and act your feelings within the bounds of dignity. The measure of your maturity is how spiritual you become during the midst of your frustrations.Children should prove to parents that they are matured enough, reliable and trustworthy before they could get their freedom. I personally think it is acceptable that parents can control their own children but be sure not to treat them like they did not know between good or bad .Children need to show to their parent that what their believe .Every children has the right to express themselves. As they mature through the years,they access more deeply information they had only abstractly understood it before.
Ladies and gentleman,
As conclusion.children have a right to participate in decisions that shape their life and therefore should be given a chance to express their own opinion. However, this right is only exercised considering the maturity and the best interest of the child. Not all decisions that a child makes will be supported by their parents or guardians
A very good morning to the director of IPG kampus ipoh, respectable lecturers and my fellow friends. I am glad to be given this golden chance to give a speech today and I would to talk about a concerning issue happen in our community lately. My speech tittle is 'Children's Freedom In Choosing Their Own Future'. Every child whether a boy or girl irrespective of age is unique and has value importance as a person with a right for their human dignity to be respected. It has a right to have a say in all decisions and matters that concern him or her, to be listened to and his or her opinion taken seriously
Freedom is meant by someone that can do whatever they want in their life but to children letting them decide their future is enough to be called as freedom. Lately, many parents not letting their children to decide their own future as they thought their children are still not ready no make such big decision. So some of them take an action by completely take over their children's life. Children need to obey with their parent 's choice without have chance to explain themselves. They want their children to be a pilot,doctor and any future occupations they want .Parents should bear in mind that no one know about children better than themself. They know what they good and bad in which parents may not know as well as them.They independent enough to make such dicision .So why not letting them choose?.
Ladies and gentleman,
On the other hand, all the children in this world have their own interest and forcing them doing what we like is not a good idea. What parents like does not mean children will like it too. For example if they had problem in studies,I am sure that they will not give their best effort on solving the particular problem .They tend to act like they don t care about it at all. As result their grade will fell down and their chance to be kicked out from university is high.This could lead them to stress and protest against parent. As a parents, it our duty to listen to the children and to consider their opinions when the decision. We should show them such a big support to encourage them in becoming a better humanbeings.Remember that children also have their own interest. So, children of today should be given freedom for their own benefits.
Apart from that, Maturity is the ability to think, speak and act your feelings within the bounds of dignity. The measure of your maturity is how spiritual you become during the midst of your frustrations.Children should prove to parents that they are matured enough, reliable and trustworthy before they could get their freedom. I personally think it is acceptable that parents can control their own children but be sure not to treat them like they did not know between good or bad .Children need to show to their parent that what their believe .Every children has the right to express themselves. As they mature through the years,they access more deeply information they had only abstractly understood it before.
Ladies and gentleman,
As conclusion.children have a right to participate in decisions that shape their life and therefore should be given a chance to express their own opinion. However, this right is only exercised considering the maturity and the best interest of the child. Not all decisions that a child makes will be supported by their parents or guardians
