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Portrait of a Muse. NYU Supplement - Movie of your life



starkizzlers 3 / 10  
Dec 31, 2009   #1
This one was difficult. :/ any pointers, tips, criticism will be greatly appreciated. Thanks!!

Portrait of a Muse



The most difficult person for 40 year old illustrator and artist [insert name] to portray in all her life was strangely enough her own mother. In their last month together as disease causes [insert mothers name] to waste away, [insert name] will make one final attempt at a portrait like her mother not only in appearance but also in spirit, discovering along the way the sacrifices and hardships made, learning to forgive old grudges and to truly understand her mother for the first time in her life.

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anjello 1 / 18  
Dec 31, 2009   #2
why 40 year old artist? shouldn't you put your age?
I really like the rest of it
nice job
OP starkizzlers 3 / 10  
Dec 31, 2009   #3
ohcrap @_@ i forgot to put the prompt. its for a movie to be made in 2050, about your life XP my bad.
but thanks for the compliment!
jeetethebest 1 / 3  
Dec 31, 2009   #4
heyy thanks for the help before... i honestly like the short answer actually wanted to keep reading..but i think you should inert names to make it more easy to read and shouldnt it be the most difficult person for a 40 year old...overall it very good and catchy ...also can you read my short answer common app question which im going to post later on thank you
anjello 1 / 18  
Jan 2, 2010   #5
Oh I see that makes sense
samisglam 2 / 5  
Jan 2, 2010   #6
this is good. i had a hard time with this question. i am assuming the artist is you? why would you choose such a high age? are to depicting yourself in the future? anyway good luck with the application.


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