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'The power behind diversity' - personal statement for v-tech



PrspectivStudnt 2 / 4  
Jan 1, 2012   #1
Prompt: What do you consider the greatest benefit(s) of a diverse educational community?

Being the key to greatness, diversity is the reason why America has evolved into the power house it is today, why technology is advancing at the speed of light, and why there is a greater knowledge of the universe surrounding us humans. The benefit of diversity has had many positive effects on the world we live in today. In an educational community, diversity has as much as a profound effect than it does anywhere else. The power behind diversity is that it brings different students with different perspectives together; this conglomeration gives students the opportunity to learn from each other and thrive as a whole. Every student has their own strengths and weaknesses which is the main evaluator for a universities level of diversity. What this means is that students with different strong points are able to assist one another's weaknesses. For example, a diligent student who is able to efficiently study might share his/her methods with other students which will equate to an overall increase in the efficacy of studying done by the student body. However, diversity is not confined to only students functioning as a team; diversity also increases the probability of innovation. With the difference of past experiences and insights, innovation is able to occur instantaneously from a diverse community, particularly one in the educational field. Diversity is an opportunity for an educational community to achieve greater heights through the variety student with distinct skills, qualities, and viewpoints.

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luvicemocha 2 / 20  
Jan 1, 2012   #2
I think it's great..

his/her

pick only his or her don't do both
if you have more space maybe you could talk about the diversity of professors/teacher and the importance of that

Overall, I think you did a great job I really like it


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