The most prestigious; BU supp/ "Why Boston University"

Boston University is one of the most prestigious universities in the United States and I would be extremely humbled to attend the school. Besides this fact, I believe that Boston University is a perfect fit for me both academically and socially. Because I am still contemplating my future career choice after college, BU's prestigious College of General Studies will offer me a perfect opportunity to take a variety of classes in different majors to find out what I am really interested in pursuing after college in a world renowned school. Socially, Boston University is a perfect fit for me. Boston is one of the greatest cities in the world and offers an international culture that is waiting to be explored and enjoyed. Growing up, I had always aspired to live in and experience a big city. However, living in the rural town of Ithaca, New York almost all my life, I never have had the opportunity to explore the wonders of a city like Boston. BU also has great diversity in its student body which will allow me to meet new friends from all ethnicities and backgrounds. BU's mission statement says that BU is "committed to educating students to be reflective, resourceful individuals ready to live, adapt, and lead in an interconnected world." I am a student who fits these criteria and am ready to lead and make a difference in this world.

please i need feedback

first off, I would take out your second use of "presitigious". it sounds a little repetitive.
Its a good essay, but it almost feels slightly generic. you kind of just list all the things you like but I think you should try to make it a little more flowing and cohesive. try to put a little more of how boston will help you and why you need it.

thanks for the critique but can you add specifics or examples on how i would go about doing that? thanks

This part should be more specific. Why do you think you fit the criteria? Why do you want to make a difference? How would you do that?


redundant. How about simply "Besides,"