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Pupil, AP biology, Biochemistry - Columbia Supplement



soshifan 2 / 6  
Dec 29, 2011   #1
Please help me, I still have tons of supplements to do, and I just want to make this one good. Thanks!

Please tell us what you found meaningful about one of the above mentioned books, publications or cultural events. (1500 characters)

Throughout my life, I have been a pupil to many sage authors, each teaching life-long lessons, but out of all the books that they have written, only a few stick out more so than The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn not only provided me with an entertaining story of the adventures of a young rebellious boy, but also taught me the importance of making my own decisions and following my own path.

The novel portrays a protagonist that many can relate to: Huck, A young boy who leaves home to find his inner freedom, a life away from society and rules. His companion is a runaway slave who he illegally hides from the authorities.

Even though we do not run away from home to avoid rules or do anything illegal, Huck shows us that life is full of obstacles. In Huck's case, his obstacles are rules in society; while in ours, obstacles may be opposition from peers or difficult challenges that we face. Huck teaches us is that it's not about how many obstacles that we face, but our willingness to surpass these bumps along the road that makes us successful in the end.

The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn reminds me that no matter how much difficulty I face, I should never lose sight of my goal.

Please tell us what academic class has been your favorite and why. (1500 characters)
Within the first two weeks of taking the class, I fell in love with AP Biology. Before attending AP Biology, I already I knew that it was a difficult college level course, but I also knew that this class was going bring me one step closer to achieving my dream of pursuing a career in the medical field. The course was, to my expectations, difficult. Every lesson in class was about something new. Before AP Biology, I never knew that proteins folded, never heard of the Electron Transport Chain, never knew what a kinetochore was. This challenge did not turn me away like it did to some of my classmates; rather it fueled my interest in this class. I am a person who loves to find out why certain things happen and how certain things work, and AP Biology answered many of those questions for me. It made me a more knowledgeable individual and gave me a strong foundation in science. AP Biology proved helpful to me in my internship at a hospital this past summer. Many doctors were amazed as I was able to understand what they were talking about medically and communicate with them. Overall, I am glad that I took AP Biology, and it is by far my favorite class.

For applicants to Columbia College, please tell us what attracts you specifically to the field or fields of study that you noted in the Application Data section. If you are currently undecided, please write about any field or fields in which you may have interest at this time, but have not yet selected as a major interest. (1500 Characters)

My attraction to biochemistry really developed when I was a child. Fascinated at how medicine seemed to cure my sicknesses every single time, I was eager to get some answers. Little did I know that this curiosity would spark my interest in science and change my life. In school, I have always anticipated science experiments. I was amazed at how two different reactants can combine to produce a totally new product. I loved looking through a microscope and seeing another world before my eyes. On my free time, I read science articles. I quickly took interest in the articles about finding cures to certain diseases. Last summer, I was lucky enough to be able to shadow high-risk obstetricians at a hospital. During my time there, I asked many medical-related questions, went to lectures every week, and gave presentations on what I have learned, but what I remember most distinctly about my internship was how quickly the doctors were able to diagnose a patient's problem and treat it, saving both the mother's and baby's lives. Biochemistry interests me because it is the gateway to saving lives. I want to expand my knowledge of the human body and how it works so like the doctors at my internship and the researchers in the articles, I too can bring an end to the menacing diseases that haunt society.

pjw7109 7 / 23  
Dec 29, 2011   #2
It might sound kind of cliche.
But I love the personal tone.

I would say pretty good overall!
dasadhikarik 5 / 10  
Dec 30, 2011   #3
only a few stick out more so than The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn

none stick out more than The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn

young rebellious boy

it's usually written the other way round: rebellious, young boy

Huck, A young boy who leaves home to find his inner freedom

Huck, a young boy who leaves home to find his inner freedom

Sorry, dude, I've got a couple more essays to write, and I'm really running short with time. But from what I've read, your responses are full of little quirks like these. Now, these help bring out your personal tone, as Juwon said, and if you think that helps, then I think you're good to go. But, if you aren't confident, then I'd look over the responses with a fine comb and pick out grammatical errors and rephrase some of the lines.

I'll try to find the time to finish looking into your response! Sorry, again.


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