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Quick question, Transfer essay: What would be a better word to use for "aspects" ?


yyhh0211 1 / -  
Mar 27, 2014   #1
With the incredible amount of diversity this school displays, I hope to partake in various social and cultural aspects found both inside and outside of the urban campus.
admission2012 - / 481 90  
Mar 27, 2014   #2
Hello,

A better word here would be "resources." Hope this helps. - Admissions Advice Online
timmy0110 3 / 3  
Mar 28, 2014   #3
what about experiences? would that work well in the context?
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 9, 2014   #4
The are many words can be dealt with. One of the words is perspective , or perception can used to replace aspect in this phrase: various social and cultural aspects found both inside and outside of the urban campus.

Hope this helps :D
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Apr 12, 2014   #5
With the incredible amount of diversity this school displays, I hope to partake in various social and cultural aspects found both inside and outside of the urban campus.

With the incredible amount of diversity this school displays, I hope to partake in various social and cultural events and forums, both inside and outside of the urban campus.

All depends on the word "partake". If you need to change the presentation of this line, you've got to do some change there :)

With this school's incredible diversity , I look forward to gaining an exposure in various social and cultural aspects.


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