** i chose the first option, writing about a significant experience and how it has influenced you. thanks in advance!
Life is like a piece of music with people as its musicians. The greatest musicians are those that keep their work resonating in the audience's ear long after they have stopped playing. As an individual, I want to continue to have the music of my accomplishments be heard long after I have gone.
My family has always been able to hear my music; however, as much as my parents listen to my melody, they do not understand that extracurricular activities like sports and work are what sync together to make my harmony. Cross-country became a major part of my high school tune when I began running my freshman year. I loved running; the overpowering adrenaline that rushed through my body while I raced was indescribable. Nothing could make me feel as content as running did. However, as great as cross-country was, it was severely energy draining. With school and practice, I was rarely home and when I was, all I could do was rest. My parents noticed this and saw only the surface of it, that it depleted my energy and time. They could not understand that running became a passion that was part of me because they believed that a valuable educational experience required only academics. By telling me, "Quit, you will be better without it," it was as though they wanted my music to be silent.
As immigrants with different educational experiences, my parents could not avoid this narrow point of view on education. However, since I knew that these extracurricular activities were essential for creating a significant learning experience, I never gave in to their words; I continued to play sports. I even began working during the summer because my parents could not afford to pay for my sport's fees. Again, those same words rang in my ear, "Quit, it's too much for you." Nevertheless, I wanted to show my parents I could do it all. That entire summer, I ran cross-country, played soccer and worked. Whether I had to wake up earlier to catch a ride with my mom or shower at friend's house for work because I commuted, I did it. I fought for it and it paid off. At the end of summer, I managed to keep a job, run, and practice soccer. My parents were wrong; I had kept my music flowing.
There are still times I wish my dad would cheer for me as I finish my race or my mom would help with team dinners. However, if it wasn't for their lack of support, I would not have developed into a persistent individual who learned that regardless of who attempts to stop me, I must always aspire to do what I love. Now, I strive to get what I want, and I will not stop until I make it happen. As I continue to make my own melody in life, I have kept that chant as a guide to lead me to create my own timeless piece of music.
I agree with karissa. I think the metaphor is extremely cliche. Trite statements like "life is like a piece of music" generally lessen the worth of your essay. Stay away from "Life is like a ____" simply overused...be original:] however, the deadlines are quickly approaching so maybe you should worry less about your common app essay and more about your supps!
