"I relate well with others" - what is one thing you do well? ohios state

Considering your talents and strengths, academic and otherwise. What is one thing you do well?...

I relate well with others; I am an outgoing and energetic person that likes and enjoys working with people and helping others. I 've developed skills in different languages and I also like to challenge myself and explore new things and new perspectives.

the paper form application, which is the one I'm doing, doesn't provide much space and this is what i could fit in there....i guess it wasn't meant to be a long-answer question....???

Any comments?? THANK YOU IN ADVANCE! (:

I was going to ask you about the word count, but apparently, Ohio State likes this succinct.

I relate well with others;. I am an outgoing and energetic person thatwholikes and(likes and enjoys are redundant) enjoys working with and helping people and helping others(again, redundant) . I 've developed skills in different languages and I also like to challenge myself and explore new things and new perspectives.

Avoid using the same word more than once. You want your statement to be composed of words that add variety, rather than state the exact same thing in different words. Build up to your point, don't reiterate it.

Also: remember, the prompt asks for ONE thing you do well. Elaborate in detail on your people skills and cut out that bit about "different languages and challenging myself."