This is my supplemental essay for the University of Pennsylvania. I know, it's not very good at the moment, but this is honestly the best I could come up with.
Thanks to everyone in advance!
Considering both the specific undergraduate school or program to which you are applying and the broader University of Pennsylvania community, what academic, research, and/or extracurricular paths do you see yourself exploring at Penn? (250 words)
I have known for two years, since I first sat down with my ten-pound Princeton Review 368 best colleges handbook, that I wanted to go to the University of Pennsylvania. Everything sounded perfect: the stellar academics, the universally brilliant but socially diverse student body, and its location in the middle of Philadelphia. I knew then that Penn was a school I would have to consider, but it wasn't until I visited campus last Spring Break that I knew just how perfect Penn's academic and extracurricular life would be for me.
I have always been interested in math and science, and plan to apply to the College of Arts and Sciences. The thing I remember most about my tour at the University was how the tour guide mentioned that he had been working in independent research since his freshman year. I would love to do research as an undergraduate, and would take full advantage of the ample independent research opportunities offered at the university.
Academics aside, the extracurricular life at Penn is what really sets it apart from other schools for me. I would of course have to join the Penn Band. I've spent hours in front of the computer "researching" Penn's band and laughing so obnoxiously that people would come into the room just to tell me to shut up. That is something that I would just have to be a part of at Penn.
Ever since my visit to Penn, I knew it would be a perfect fit. The research and extracurricular opportunities make it a place where I would love to spend four years.
Also, if anyone has time, I'd love if someone could critique my Common App short answer essay. I posted a 2nd draft that no one's read yet.
Thanks to everyone in advance!
Considering both the specific undergraduate school or program to which you are applying and the broader University of Pennsylvania community, what academic, research, and/or extracurricular paths do you see yourself exploring at Penn? (250 words)
I have known for two years, since I first sat down with my ten-pound Princeton Review 368 best colleges handbook, that I wanted to go to the University of Pennsylvania. Everything sounded perfect: the stellar academics, the universally brilliant but socially diverse student body, and its location in the middle of Philadelphia. I knew then that Penn was a school I would have to consider, but it wasn't until I visited campus last Spring Break that I knew just how perfect Penn's academic and extracurricular life would be for me.
I have always been interested in math and science, and plan to apply to the College of Arts and Sciences. The thing I remember most about my tour at the University was how the tour guide mentioned that he had been working in independent research since his freshman year. I would love to do research as an undergraduate, and would take full advantage of the ample independent research opportunities offered at the university.
Academics aside, the extracurricular life at Penn is what really sets it apart from other schools for me. I would of course have to join the Penn Band. I've spent hours in front of the computer "researching" Penn's band and laughing so obnoxiously that people would come into the room just to tell me to shut up. That is something that I would just have to be a part of at Penn.
Ever since my visit to Penn, I knew it would be a perfect fit. The research and extracurricular opportunities make it a place where I would love to spend four years.
Also, if anyone has time, I'd love if someone could critique my Common App short answer essay. I posted a 2nd draft that no one's read yet.