'the right choice' What in particular about Yale has influenced your decision to apply?

What in particular about Yale has influenced your decision to apply? (250 Words)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING THE TIME TO READ AND EVALUATE. I WILL FOREVER BE INDEBTED TO YOU! <3 <3

I don't know what to do in life, but I feel Yale will help me choose the right choice with so many different academic components I would like to try out from computer science to psychology to figure drawing. I'm interested in a bit of everything, something Yale has. I would be so excited to join the symphony orchestra as a flautist and join sports such as rugby or climbing. My friend Lining raves of the safe environment with a great social support "cocoon" like FroCo groups and down to earth people she met.

The word limit is 100 words not 250 (I don't think you're over the limit though). I think you need to be more specific and say what you can bring to Yale.

Also can you please look at mine. Thanks

This is not a positive note to start... The admission guys may not find this is very pleasing. You need to show that you have a vision and when you say that you don't have a particular goal, that may be very disadvantageous for you.


You should have started with this.


Knight14 is right. Skim the most essential and present them in your response.