Here are my short responses for my Rochester Supplement. Would you please read over it and edit it or provide feedback? I'll return the favor, thanks!
1. Why Rochester? - Rochester students live on campus together but commit to self-direction and self-determination through our curriculum. Independent, confident thinkers who ''play well with others'' thrive here. Show us how this uncommon intersection of traits describes you, and tell us why you would excel at Rochester. (125 Word Max)
As co-manager of a robotics group, I find myself trying to both plan my team's course of action and work with them to create our robot. In order to have a productive team, I take the initiative, prior to meetings, to research potential designs that we may use. Some designs are simple and time efficient, while others are time consuming but would work very effectively. As co-manager, I must weigh my options and confidently chose a design that I feel will be feasible and functional. Afterwards, my work continues. I must work alongside my team members in order to make the designs become a solid robot. I feel that my ability think and plan individually and also collaboratively work will let me prosper at Rochester.
2. Meliora: 'Ever better' - The University's motto, Meliora, directs our focus toward continual improvement through research, understanding, and collaborative efforts. Offer an example from your personal experience of an obstacle you faced or a problem you identified. Describe the actions you took and the result. (125 Word Max)
When my grandfather became terminally ill with cancer, it seemed as if my relaxed world shattered. With my parents busy taking care of him, chores now fell upon me at an alarming rate and felt unbearable. I was spending all of my time doing school work or chores and neglecting my grandpa in his last days; I was struggling to balance my life. I had to manage my time more efficiently to be able to do all of these things, so I bought an agenda and started to plan out my days a week in advanced. It took time and commitment to learn to follow my schedule but eventually, I was finally able have the time I needed to spend time with my grandpa.
1. Why Rochester? - Rochester students live on campus together but commit to self-direction and self-determination through our curriculum. Independent, confident thinkers who ''play well with others'' thrive here. Show us how this uncommon intersection of traits describes you, and tell us why you would excel at Rochester. (125 Word Max)
As co-manager of a robotics group, I find myself trying to both plan my team's course of action and work with them to create our robot. In order to have a productive team, I take the initiative, prior to meetings, to research potential designs that we may use. Some designs are simple and time efficient, while others are time consuming but would work very effectively. As co-manager, I must weigh my options and confidently chose a design that I feel will be feasible and functional. Afterwards, my work continues. I must work alongside my team members in order to make the designs become a solid robot. I feel that my ability think and plan individually and also collaboratively work will let me prosper at Rochester.
2. Meliora: 'Ever better' - The University's motto, Meliora, directs our focus toward continual improvement through research, understanding, and collaborative efforts. Offer an example from your personal experience of an obstacle you faced or a problem you identified. Describe the actions you took and the result. (125 Word Max)
When my grandfather became terminally ill with cancer, it seemed as if my relaxed world shattered. With my parents busy taking care of him, chores now fell upon me at an alarming rate and felt unbearable. I was spending all of my time doing school work or chores and neglecting my grandpa in his last days; I was struggling to balance my life. I had to manage my time more efficiently to be able to do all of these things, so I bought an agenda and started to plan out my days a week in advanced. It took time and commitment to learn to follow my schedule but eventually, I was finally able have the time I needed to spend time with my grandpa.