Rochester Supplement -What makes it good for me?

1. What makes the University of Rochester a good fit for you? In answering, identify your sources of information, including any conversations you've had with Rochester faculty, staff, students, or alumni.

What makes a university good? A good university feeds the curiosity of others, has excellent educational facilities, and a diverse environment. These factors shape my rationale for choosing the University of Rochester. Through my conversation with student Ravi Patel, I learned that every student, despite their chosen major, is encouraged to indulge in the University's research opportunities. Independent research will not only allow me to broaden my thought process in business decision making, but also prepare me for a career in business management. Through another conversation with former graduate Shailesh Patel, I have come to appreciate the University's open curriculum. The open curriculum permits me to explore my curiosities and enables me to learn efficiently. Lastly, Rochester's diverse campus will help enrich my college experience.

Word limit is 125, 1000 characters

Can anyone check if it is consistant, any grammitical errors, and if it answers the question. Thank you.

I think this answers the question quite concisely, in that you cite both students that you know, list the benefits of a Rochester education, and state your goals. I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors in my reading, although that's never been my strong point so it'd be better if someone else looked it over. The content is excellent, though!

Thank you

Try to show how Rochester is better than most school, and really put enough emphasis on why you want to attend it. Its really good though...keep up the good work!

A good university feeds the curiosity of its students , has excellent educational facilities, and a diverse environment.

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