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Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer, 1000 character maximum).
In my freshmen summer vacation, I designed the backdrop curtain and manufactured the whole framework for a group of comic fans, which helped them to rock the Comic-Con. At first, the group asked me for help to set up a corrugated paper made background curtain, however, as the corrugated paper could not stand well due to the gravity, this idea was proved to be less superior. Visited the building market, observed the professional architectural structure models and had quite a conversation with the group, a new thought emerged: applying to the advanced advertising inkjet technology. The inkjet painting was very successful and economical. As for the frame, I have conducted several experiments and finally chose the aluminum tube as the skeleton support. I was very glad that the work performed so well during on the stage. That summer was quite special.
I find it strange. I am not sure if the admission office will be interested in my comiccon's experience.Do you think it's okay？
And, do you think there are some improper sentences in the essay?
Thank you and good luck to everyone!
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer, 1000 character maximum).
In my freshmen summer vacation, I designed the backdrop curtain and manufactured the whole framework for a group of comic fans, which helped them to rock the Comic-Con. At first, the group asked me for help to set up a corrugated paper made background curtain, however, as the corrugated paper could not stand well due to the gravity, this idea was proved to be less superior. Visited the building market, observed the professional architectural structure models and had quite a conversation with the group, a new thought emerged: applying to the advanced advertising inkjet technology. The inkjet painting was very successful and economical. As for the frame, I have conducted several experiments and finally chose the aluminum tube as the skeleton support. I was very glad that the work performed so well during on the stage. That summer was quite special.
I find it strange. I am not sure if the admission office will be interested in my comiccon's experience.Do you think it's okay？
And, do you think there are some improper sentences in the essay?
Thank you and good luck to everyone!