This supplement is the hardest thing I have ever written!! And I thought it would be the easiest... I'm still working on it right now, but I just wanted to know if the direction I'm going in is okay. I'm afraid it's too risky and unprofessional.
Prompt: It is three weeks before the start of your freshman year at BU, and you are talking to your new roommate for the first time. Since you are trying to get to know each other, what are a few things you would want to share about who you are? (500 words max)
Who am I? Who am I?! I am the guardian of lost souls! I am the powerful, the pleasurable, the indestructible--- Hold on, hold on, let us rewind for a second. That lizard-like red dragon you just saw over there is Mushu. And that little Chinese warrior next to the horse is actually a woman, and her name is Mulan. You see, when I found out you wanted to get to know me a little better, I just knew I had to introduce you to my friends. Mushu and Mulan have been with me ever since I was a toddler, and they know me best! I asked them to conduct a field study of me and this is what they discovered.
Name: Ms. Alicia Tang
Species Type: A proud Homo Sapien Sapien
Natural Habitat(s): where the wild things are, the center of a heavily-populated city, her bed
Distinctive Physical Features: straight black hair, pinchable baby cheeks, intimidating eyes
Habits: Moving around. Despite being confined in a seat or between walls, she always manages to spontaneously break out into dance. Even when she's eating. She also clenches her fists and twirls her hair when she is in deep thought or concentration. These habits occurs multiple times throughout the day and is usually coupled with muttered speaking. Beware she often laughs to (or at) herself.
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My questions/comments:
- Do you think the AO's will know who/what Mulan is?
- I wanted to use "detailed" bullet points since that's what field reports are like, but I didn't think the AO's would like that. What do you think?
- Since the field report is written by my two "friends" Mushu and Mulan, I want to make it a bit silly, but I'm not sure if the AO's will remember/understand that in this context, I'm not the who wrote the field report. (I don't want them to get confused with all the little silly comments)
- I think in the field report, I switch back and forth from a silly tone and a more professional tone. Would it be bad to go with the silly tone?
- If you're wondering why I chose to use a field report, it's because I was watching a movie and I thought the idea was interesting. I'm not planning on majoring in anything that has to do with field studies though so is that bad?
Comments, critiques, anything is greatly appreciated! If you think this whole entire thing is too weird and that I should just start over, then please do tell me. Thanks! :)
Prompt: It is three weeks before the start of your freshman year at BU, and you are talking to your new roommate for the first time. Since you are trying to get to know each other, what are a few things you would want to share about who you are? (500 words max)
Who am I? Who am I?! I am the guardian of lost souls! I am the powerful, the pleasurable, the indestructible--- Hold on, hold on, let us rewind for a second. That lizard-like red dragon you just saw over there is Mushu. And that little Chinese warrior next to the horse is actually a woman, and her name is Mulan. You see, when I found out you wanted to get to know me a little better, I just knew I had to introduce you to my friends. Mushu and Mulan have been with me ever since I was a toddler, and they know me best! I asked them to conduct a field study of me and this is what they discovered.
Name: Ms. Alicia Tang
Species Type: A proud Homo Sapien Sapien
Natural Habitat(s): where the wild things are, the center of a heavily-populated city, her bed
Distinctive Physical Features: straight black hair, pinchable baby cheeks, intimidating eyes
Habits: Moving around. Despite being confined in a seat or between walls, she always manages to spontaneously break out into dance. Even when she's eating. She also clenches her fists and twirls her hair when she is in deep thought or concentration. These habits occurs multiple times throughout the day and is usually coupled with muttered speaking. Beware she often laughs to (or at) herself.
______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
My questions/comments:
- Do you think the AO's will know who/what Mulan is?
- I wanted to use "detailed" bullet points since that's what field reports are like, but I didn't think the AO's would like that. What do you think?
- Since the field report is written by my two "friends" Mushu and Mulan, I want to make it a bit silly, but I'm not sure if the AO's will remember/understand that in this context, I'm not the who wrote the field report. (I don't want them to get confused with all the little silly comments)
- I think in the field report, I switch back and forth from a silly tone and a more professional tone. Would it be bad to go with the silly tone?
- If you're wondering why I chose to use a field report, it's because I was watching a movie and I thought the idea was interesting. I'm not planning on majoring in anything that has to do with field studies though so is that bad?
Comments, critiques, anything is greatly appreciated! If you think this whole entire thing is too weird and that I should just start over, then please do tell me. Thanks! :)
