Hello, as I said in my previous threads Im from Colombia, therefore my first language is not english, thus my grammar is so so so bad! ... please be very critical with my grammar all that you can , and please tell me if the subject of the note for my roommate is good or if I have to change the subject or issue completly.
Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate - and us - know you better.Here is:
"I'm a salsa student; actually, I come from the capitol world of Salsa, Cali-Colombia, so I can teach you the Salsa Caleńa. I Love read, cook, walk through nature, ride bicycle and I'm a caretaker of nature I can`t stand pollution, and things which are against the nature, I love meet people around the world, I'm member of a community world called CouchSurging.org where our objective is show, guide and help the travelers that come to our city, I've been accommodating some people around the world in my house, sharing a lot of things like foods, languages, cultures, dances, etc and learning things about their tastes, for example I already know that people from Europe doesn't like chocolate with cheese, but in my country we love it as breakfast thus I don't offer them choclate with cheese in the breakfast when they are staying in my house. For that I'm easygoing with people that has other cultures different than mine, thus I'm sure that you and I will have a great experience in our room.
I'm a person that like take challenges in my life, I like do different things each day, I think that the stuff that we have in our room reveals our personality, for example if you see my actual room you'd see things about nature, awards, nature's picture and lot of things that will reveals you that I'm member of a Scout's Association.
We could do extreme sports, I love it. As I told you I like take challenges, and the extreme sports are for me, for you too?
I'm anxious to meet you for do things as cooking the typical food from your country, and from my country, for you can teach me things about your culture, your language and your tastes.
I'll be more than your roommate; I'm dispose to be your friend, your trust person. I'm sure that you and I will have a good relationship."
Thanks a lot in advance.
Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate - and us - know you better.Here is:
"I'm a salsa student; actually, I come from the capitol world of Salsa, Cali-Colombia, so I can teach you the Salsa Caleńa. I Love read, cook, walk through nature, ride bicycle and I'm a caretaker of nature I can`t stand pollution, and things which are against the nature, I love meet people around the world, I'm member of a community world called CouchSurging.org where our objective is show, guide and help the travelers that come to our city, I've been accommodating some people around the world in my house, sharing a lot of things like foods, languages, cultures, dances, etc and learning things about their tastes, for example I already know that people from Europe doesn't like chocolate with cheese, but in my country we love it as breakfast thus I don't offer them choclate with cheese in the breakfast when they are staying in my house. For that I'm easygoing with people that has other cultures different than mine, thus I'm sure that you and I will have a great experience in our room.
I'm a person that like take challenges in my life, I like do different things each day, I think that the stuff that we have in our room reveals our personality, for example if you see my actual room you'd see things about nature, awards, nature's picture and lot of things that will reveals you that I'm member of a Scout's Association.
We could do extreme sports, I love it. As I told you I like take challenges, and the extreme sports are for me, for you too?
I'm anxious to meet you for do things as cooking the typical food from your country, and from my country, for you can teach me things about your culture, your language and your tastes.
I'll be more than your roommate; I'm dispose to be your friend, your trust person. I'm sure that you and I will have a good relationship."
Thanks a lot in advance.