I'd appreciate any help I can get with this. It's the Why Yale question on the Yale supplement. There's a limit of 500 characters and I'm at 498. Thank you soo much. If you could also help with my Common App Essay, I'd appreciate that as well.
In Southern Arkansas, my home for more than 10 years, diversity and opportunities have always been few. Thus, my biggest dreams have been to see more of the world, experience variety, and gain opportunities that are not available to me in Arkansas; like the pursuit of a degree in Cognitive Science. After further discussion with a student, Yale has become to me what America has been to others; a place of opportunity and diversity. A place where I can finally realize all of my goals and dreams.
In Southern Arkansas, my home for more than 10 years, diversity and opportunities have always been few. Thus, my biggest dreams have been to see more of the world, experience variety, and gain opportunities that are not available to me in Arkansas; like the pursuit of a degree in Cognitive Science. After further discussion with a student, Yale has become to me what America has been to others; a place of opportunity and diversity. A place where I can finally realize all of my goals and dreams.