Seeking admission to one of the best Computer Science undergraduate programs in India - SOP

I have recently completed my Schooling. My early fascination for computers (since high school), combined with a strong liking for the subject inspired me to seek admission to one of the best Computer Science undergraduate programs in India. This decision followed naturally after carefully considering my academic background, the areas of my interest, and my ultimate professional ambition, which is to be a software engineer.

My aspiration to work at the frontiers of a software company leads me to apply to your university. I have always believed that a subject is understood better when one actually sees an abstract theory being realized by a practical system. In my opinion a comprehensive knowledge and a good grasp of fundamentals are essential for a career in this field. I feel that Graduate studies in Computer Science in a good University like yours will help me to attain this objective.

I am aware that SNU expects very high standards from its students. On my part, I can assure you of sincerity and hard work. And I am confident that my enthusiasm will enable me to meet your expectations.

- I have recently completed my Schooling( do you mean secondary education?) .

- My early fascination for computers (since high school), combined with a strong likingdesire for the subject inspired me to seek admission to one of the best Computer Science undergraduate programs in India.

- My aspiration to work at the frontiers of a software company leads me to apply toat your university.

- I feel that Graduate studies in Computer Science in a good University like yours will help me to attain this objective.

- On my part, I can assure you of my sincerity and hard work.

- And I am confident that my enthusiasm and dedication to Computer Science will enable me to meet your expectations.

Kushal, since this is an application to a university, I feel like it lacks the kick or the spirit that an admission officer is looking for.

Clearly you need to talk about yourself, your accomplishments and your inputs to the field, however, you miss the point of talking about the institution, questions like, what can you do to improve or bring awareness to hopeful software engineers, answer this question and add it to your final paragraph, it definitely will add strength to your application.

Remember, you need the institution to help you build your future and the institution need you to build and strengthen their reputation.

Keep writing

Cheers!!!

kaushal21, i think that in the first paragraph instead of which is to be a software engineer , you should write to become a software ingineer !

I do love this question - My aspiration to work at the frontiers of a software company leads me to apply to your university. Nice said!

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