Not until the end years of high school did I come to the conclusion that chemical engineering is the major for me.
This sentence sounds a bit odd, how about- However, it wasn't until the final years of my high school career that I came to the conclusion that chemical engineering is the major best suited for me.
In school, I excelled in science far above other subjects. This was thanks my personal qualities of thinking logically and possessing a boundless imagination-two things a scientist should have.
Thanks to my boundless imagination and innate ability to think logically, qualities indispensable to a scientist, I excelled in my science courses far above other subjects.
I Read articles on the latest technologies, watched sci-fi, enjoyed James Bond films, and went on the internet often. I believe my father is to blame, himself being a chemist for Arco. All of these factors helped shape my viewpoint that science is the way to a brighter future.
My father, himself being a chemist for ARCO oil company, also greatly influenced my interests. From reading scientific journals and researching on the internet to laying back and enjoying science fiction films. All of these factors helped shape my viewpoint that a career in science is the best way to a brighter future.
In selecting Chemical Engineering, I will get to
By selecting Chemical Engineering, I will get to...
These are a few corrections, but you have some great points to make :)