any significant experiences you had or accomplishments to define you as a person?

can you help me to make an essay??

The main objective that adcomms have as pertain your essay is to have an insight into your personality. Think of it as putting a face to your application. It would be very detrimental therefore, to have someone write your essay for you. Not only is it lack of integrity and a serious breach of many colleges 'honor Code', but it also puts you at a disadvantage as what is projected by the essay would not necessarily be a reflection of your values and what you find important. I therefore advise you to write down a rough draft, it does not have to be perfect. Try writing down your favorite moments in high school. With this, cut down the ones that are inappropriate ( the party where you got wasted?? lol!!) and keep the ones that actually are important to you. Scribble a few lines about this as presto. You have a rough draft. If you post this up, we are at a better position to help you. Grammatically, checking for coherence, the works.

I hope you found this helpful. I am sure you will find the whole essay writing experience significant. It is time for serious self-evaluation. You might even find your self (not saying you are lost in the fist place... lol! Pardon my lame jokes..)

Good luck!

Brian Mwarania

It's hard to start if you don't have a sense of purpose. Your purpose is to show them how serious you are about this program of study. Some students have a real dream, a vision for the future, and other students just go to school because they have to.

USE THIS OPPORTUNITY to express ideas and influences someone's state of mind. In life, this is all there is.