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My essay:
My life was consecutive challenges. I never had quiet and calm days because of my family. My dad has impulse control disorder. His disorder made my older brother and mom to leave his house. I was the only one who stays in his house and deal with his stress. He always trying to fight with me for meaningless things. I had stressful time and oppressed by my father until the high school. Well, you can guess my face wasn't happiest person in the world and I always tried to hide this family issues from other people.
During the high school, I was lost. There was nobody I could talk to and I was embarrassed about lived in poverty. I couldn't even invite my friends to the house or hang out with them since I didn't have a dollar in my pocket. I didn't have any dream until the day my father called me "useless". This incident made me a different person. I want to become one of the most successful person in the world to prove that his wrong. Then I became involve with many student groups like student council to understand how to become a leader. It wasn't on my plan but I became a positive person and I learned that there were similar experiences just like what I have been gone through.
Sometimes I look back on my past to see how much I have grown up. Now, I go talk to people rather than wait for someone talk to me. I don't hesitate anymore but rather moving forward. I don't need to ask for help but rather I want to help other people.
Now I want to become the leader who can give positive mind to someone else. I want to study economic and help people whoever suffer from poverty just like I did. I know the feeling who want to become successful but couldn't achieve it due to an unfair system.
By studying the economic I would able to understand how the system work. I want to study in the one of most prestigious school in Texas in order to achieve this dream. I want to study at the University of Texas at Austin to grow as better leader and influence positive thought to others. It would be an honor for me to study at the University of Texas at Austin and it will be turning point for my life.
My essay:
My life was consecutive challenges. I never had quiet and calm days because of my family. My dad has impulse control disorder. His disorder made my older brother and mom to leave his house. I was the only one who stays in his house and deal with his stress. He always trying to fight with me for meaningless things. I had stressful time and oppressed by my father until the high school. Well, you can guess my face wasn't happiest person in the world and I always tried to hide this family issues from other people.
During the high school, I was lost. There was nobody I could talk to and I was embarrassed about lived in poverty. I couldn't even invite my friends to the house or hang out with them since I didn't have a dollar in my pocket. I didn't have any dream until the day my father called me "useless". This incident made me a different person. I want to become one of the most successful person in the world to prove that his wrong. Then I became involve with many student groups like student council to understand how to become a leader. It wasn't on my plan but I became a positive person and I learned that there were similar experiences just like what I have been gone through.
Sometimes I look back on my past to see how much I have grown up. Now, I go talk to people rather than wait for someone talk to me. I don't hesitate anymore but rather moving forward. I don't need to ask for help but rather I want to help other people.
Now I want to become the leader who can give positive mind to someone else. I want to study economic and help people whoever suffer from poverty just like I did. I know the feeling who want to become successful but couldn't achieve it due to an unfair system.
By studying the economic I would able to understand how the system work. I want to study in the one of most prestigious school in Texas in order to achieve this dream. I want to study at the University of Texas at Austin to grow as better leader and influence positive thought to others. It would be an honor for me to study at the University of Texas at Austin and it will be turning point for my life.