Sovereignty,Class selection,Student body ; Boston U- Good Fit/ Why apply?

Short Answer:

In a few sentences, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission?

There is only 750 characters allowed, so it is necessary to conserve space

Boston University is a good fit for me because of the sovereignty that is offered to students. The class selection intrigues me. The student body is diverse as well as adventurous. The university campus is what the type of campus I like most. BU presents promising research opportunities for focused, independent aspiring scientists. I will study and participate in many extracurricular clubs and activities. I anticipate taking the lead in my future and capitalizing on opportunities to make the most out of BU. There is a very well-structured biochemical program. The bio-molecular research conducted interests me and it has led me to apply for admission. I want to apply the insight I obtain at BU to the advancing world of molecular biology.

If you think you have a revision, idea, or sentence that sounds better feel free to let me know!!! Thanks :)

I think you should make your essay more personal, I feel like any one could have written this. If you have ever been to the campus like for a visit, write about the visit and tell about what was exceptional to you. I don't think that you should include the bit about diversity in that form because it's like telling them something that they already know.

Thanks for the feedback!

I agree, talk about what you would do if you were on the campus. To get into this mood, think about the libraries and think, maybe someday, I could be studying day. Or maybe someday, i could be walking down that street. Imagine yourself there.