all we write is something you would probably called "argumentative essay".
Well, this one is called an expository essay, and that means you are exposing something and explaining it.
Start by saying something intriguing to get the reader's attention. I think you did a good job of that here:
When you are young you have to do what you are told by your parents,
and when you grow you have to do what laws say.
And at the end of your first para, you should give a thesis statement that answers the question they posed. You did a good job with this, too! Let's use a set of 2 dashes, though----> In my case, these were Scout law, the Commandments,
and -- when I got older --
And one more change:
For me, m
My integrity contract involves two aspects - being...