Bungee jumping reflected the debilitating effects of self-doubt in the most extreme form.
technically it doesnt. it reflected you DEFYING your weakness and fear
I had an opportunity to challengemy mentality on one of my greatest adversities
Fear made me thing I can't
think , i'm guessing?
but when trouble came, I usually lived with it. I was too passive, so I needed a red badge of courage to assert control over my decisions. All my troubles, all my regrets could have been avoided if only I was strong enough.
elaborate. this is your main idea. what do you mean by living with it--were you the cowering civilian instead of the hero? how does a badge of courage help you control your decisions? strong enough, as in muscular? (strong is a bit vague)
i think reeking is too strong a word--it reminds me of trash and not taking a bath for days. use emanate, maybe?
for a full three minute
s"Fear made me think I can't" i'm kind of iffy on this one, but i think it's "i couldn't"
Pretty cool--I want to bungee jump. :)
it'd be nice if you added something like "now i look from the second-floor balcony with no problem" showing how you have conquered your fear.
if you can, check my roomate essay please?