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I jumped and grabbed the monkey bars while my friends stared up at my dangling, four-year old legs. I wrapped my legs around a neighboring bar and hoisted my body through the gap. After wrestling with my arms for the perfect position, I sat up victoriously on the top of the bars. For the rest of the day, I couldn't wipe that smile of satisfaction off my face. Looking back, I can remember those days of elementary school when I was the fearless kid, the first to do everything. Not much has changed for me since then.
When I first started to narrow down my list of colleges, the traits on the list were strong engineering programs (in a university), strong learning environment, great athletic facilities, and near/in a city. However, so many schools fit into these categories that I had trouble narrowing down my prospects. These traits are all good in a college but I was missing the point. What do I want to gain out of my college experience? I want to feel the same way I felt that day on the monkey bars: curious and eager to explore. Stanford is the only college that shares those feelings with me.
Stanford is a research university. More than any other school on my college list, Stanford wants to explore, not only teach. The amazing feeling I felt when I discovered something new on those monkey bars is one I never want to let go of. We might experiment differently from each other but Stanford and I are still both curious. I can see myself several months from now reading in the Meyer Library, searching the stacks with the same curiosity as a jungle gym. Wandering the gorgeous Mediterranean architecture, I will find my new hang out spot for the next four years.
Stanford has thousands of unique qualities, all of which I pondered while choosing it as my first choice, but at the end of the day all that matters is how I feel about that college. I love the way Stanford makes me feel because of its commitment to curiosity.
I jumped and grabbed the monkey bars while my friends stared up at my dangling, four-year old legs. I wrapped my legs around a neighboring bar and hoisted my body through the gap. After wrestling with my arms for the perfect position, I sat up victoriously on the top of the bars. For the rest of the day, I couldn't wipe that smile of satisfaction off my face. Looking back, I can remember those days of elementary school when I was the fearless kid, the first to do everything. Not much has changed for me since then.
When I first started to narrow down my list of colleges, the traits on the list were strong engineering programs (in a university), strong learning environment, great athletic facilities, and near/in a city. However, so many schools fit into these categories that I had trouble narrowing down my prospects. These traits are all good in a college but I was missing the point. What do I want to gain out of my college experience? I want to feel the same way I felt that day on the monkey bars: curious and eager to explore. Stanford is the only college that shares those feelings with me.
Stanford is a research university. More than any other school on my college list, Stanford wants to explore, not only teach. The amazing feeling I felt when I discovered something new on those monkey bars is one I never want to let go of. We might experiment differently from each other but Stanford and I are still both curious. I can see myself several months from now reading in the Meyer Library, searching the stacks with the same curiosity as a jungle gym. Wandering the gorgeous Mediterranean architecture, I will find my new hang out spot for the next four years.
Stanford has thousands of unique qualities, all of which I pondered while choosing it as my first choice, but at the end of the day all that matters is how I feel about that college. I love the way Stanford makes me feel because of its commitment to curiosity.