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Stanford roommate Essay-With me, you will never enter the wrong room



veronica1 1 / 1  
Jan 2, 2015   #1
Dear Roomie,

This is WY! I'm excited to spend the next year with you (and hopefully three more after that!)

With me, you will never enter the wrong room because our dorm will always be the one with appetizing smell. Yang-style Chinese dishes will definitely surprise you: dumplings with creative stuffing and various dim sums! Music is also my love and I may practice the harmonica or sing involuntarily. Feel comfortable joining in or letting me know when to cut it out. As for my hobbies, reading is my favorite pastime. If I'm not in dorm, the most possible place is the library. To relax, apart from tennis and swimming, I often do Tai Chi. I can teach you if you are also interested.

I am humorous and pretty good at telling jokes. I am always curious about new knowledge, people and culture. Besides, a neat freak is greeting you. Let's work together to make our dorm comfortable for living and studying!

I am a good listener and advisor. So feel free to chat with me. I will try my best to help when you need me. I myself really enjoy friends sitting together and sharing something. If you like, we can discuss our academic puzzles, read books or talk about dreams and crazy ideas, while enjoying my hand-made snacks. Hope we will become friends that can count on each other and make progress together.

I can't wait to know more about you and explore Stanford with you!

Sincerely,
WY
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Thanks for reading and really appreciate all the suggestions.
I think I talk about too much things but they are all me and I don't know to cut which part off.
Again, Thanks very much!

dash 1 / 4  
Jan 2, 2015   #2
Very good selection of words.
You can also add , that you can learn somethings from your rommie.
As you can add as how you can work together to get along well and make the coming year special and exciting.
Again Very Good.


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