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Your Statement of Purpose helps us find out more about your personal vision; Please tell us what your work is about.
I have very little knowledge and experience for art, but what I have now is only passion. I have mainly done paintings and drawings but during the process of the portfolio, I decided to take the risk to experiment with different types of media. I believe that it would be a good opportunity to create more diverse art works, and throughout the process, I can identify which ones I like or do not like.
My art works focused mainly on the human figures. I used to avoid on that part when drawing because they were difficult and never was satisfied in doing so. To work on my weakness, I purposely tackled this particular subject. "Practice makes perfect", I practiced drawing faces and bodies on my sketchbook until they looked real. Also, I admire the works of Auguste Rodin. His sculptures were so fascinating, full of expression and life, his works were my inspiration.
Art is spontaneous, don't always try to plan everything, let your mind flow naturally. My art teacher handed me a bunch of materials, without any other instructions, told me to create something. At first I was confused, I had no plans, no directions to go to, no concept. However, I started doing something, and in my mind, kept thinking what would be best to do while working. Instead of me working on the art, it turned the other way around.
Thanks in advance!
Your Statement of Purpose helps us find out more about your personal vision; Please tell us what your work is about.
I have very little knowledge and experience for art, but what I have now is only passion. I have mainly done paintings and drawings but during the process of the portfolio, I decided to take the risk to experiment with different types of media. I believe that it would be a good opportunity to create more diverse art works, and throughout the process, I can identify which ones I like or do not like.
My art works focused mainly on the human figures. I used to avoid on that part when drawing because they were difficult and never was satisfied in doing so. To work on my weakness, I purposely tackled this particular subject. "Practice makes perfect", I practiced drawing faces and bodies on my sketchbook until they looked real. Also, I admire the works of Auguste Rodin. His sculptures were so fascinating, full of expression and life, his works were my inspiration.
Art is spontaneous, don't always try to plan everything, let your mind flow naturally. My art teacher handed me a bunch of materials, without any other instructions, told me to create something. At first I was confused, I had no plans, no directions to go to, no concept. However, I started doing something, and in my mind, kept thinking what would be best to do while working. Instead of me working on the art, it turned the other way around.