I am applying to UHart. Their essay question reads:
Considering your strengths, talents, and interest why do you wish to attend UHart?
I came up with this rough draft. I'm not sure if it fully answers the question. Any help would be great!
I have come a long way since the beginning of my high school career. I started out as a shy kid, who basically just focused on his studies. Over the course of three or so years, I discovered some faith and courage in myself to finally break out of my shell. This allowed me to discover what I wanted out of life. I found my goals, my dreams. I began to set out and reach these goals. My determination to make a good future for myself grows more every day.
I am not exactly sure what I am most talented at but I do know what I take most pride in; that is writing. In my opinion, going to the University of Hartford would allow me to excel greatly in my knowledge and understanding of English and writing.
I would like to major in English at the University of Hartford and minor in video. I believe the University of Hartford will help me not only to find myself further but also the happiness I strive for in success. I am hoping to be to garner higher knowledge in writing through the University of Hartford's English program and be able to combine those ideas with what I learn in the film courses-to essentially find a career in writing for film and/or television. I am not very strong in math or science; therefore, majoring in English and video, I would be able to learn in an area that I have a great passion for.
I am done dreaming. I am ready to make my dreams happen. I believe the University of Hartford will allow me to do so.
Considering your strengths, talents, and interest why do you wish to attend UHart?
I came up with this rough draft. I'm not sure if it fully answers the question. Any help would be great!
I have come a long way since the beginning of my high school career. I started out as a shy kid, who basically just focused on his studies. Over the course of three or so years, I discovered some faith and courage in myself to finally break out of my shell. This allowed me to discover what I wanted out of life. I found my goals, my dreams. I began to set out and reach these goals. My determination to make a good future for myself grows more every day.
I am not exactly sure what I am most talented at but I do know what I take most pride in; that is writing. In my opinion, going to the University of Hartford would allow me to excel greatly in my knowledge and understanding of English and writing.
I would like to major in English at the University of Hartford and minor in video. I believe the University of Hartford will help me not only to find myself further but also the happiness I strive for in success. I am hoping to be to garner higher knowledge in writing through the University of Hartford's English program and be able to combine those ideas with what I learn in the film courses-to essentially find a career in writing for film and/or television. I am not very strong in math or science; therefore, majoring in English and video, I would be able to learn in an area that I have a great passion for.
I am done dreaming. I am ready to make my dreams happen. I believe the University of Hartford will allow me to do so.
