Studying in Canada to be a dental hygienest and improve English.

Since I was studying at intermdiate school my dream to becom math teacher. After I graduated from secondr school, I applied in many unversity.However, I had not got acceptence in math college. That made my et a year not studying. One night I and my frinde were reading the newspaper we so ads for health college. Next day we want to apply in that college and I was lucky I ccepted . I have shosen dental hygienest and I studied for three year.

I have working as a dental hygienest for teen years. In my work I l have learn to be impition , so I decided to complete my sudy in Canada. I am studying English language to improve my language.

Since studying at intermdiate school, my dream has been to become a math teacher.

After I graduated from secondary school, I applied at many universities.

However, I did not get accepted to a college for math, which caused me a year of not studying.

One night my friends and I were reading the newspaper and saw ads for health college.

The next day, we went to apply at that college and I was lucky enough to be ccepted.

I have chosen dental hygienest and have studied for three years .

I have been working as a dental hygienest for teen---is this supposed to be 'ten years'?

What is it that you really want to do most, become a math teacher, or be a dental hygienist? Did you realize that you love working for a dentist and your dream has changed, or are you settling for that because it was convenient? I think your essay would be better and more personal if you answer one of these questions.

Good luck in school and have fun!