My most important extracurricular is volunteer work that takes place at the Sunrise Assisted Living home in Westfield, New Jersey; a home for the elderly and a place for those with Alzheimer's. Since September 2009 I have been going to Sunrise almost every Saturday for about 2 to 3 hours. In the beginning months of my volunteering there I held an art class in which the residents would stop by and make small crafts with me. I would also go to Reminiscent; the unit in which the Alzheimer's patients stay, and play games with them or help the workers serve lunch. In the more recent months I have been helping a retired professor write various articles to newspapers and magazines. In addition to this, I help residents with their computers, go on walks, complete puzzles, and just talk about their days. Currently we are beginning to arrange activities for the new year.
"the Sunrise Assisted Living home volunteer work" - short extracurricular explanation
It sounds a bit choppy but good other than that. Perhaps it would be good to add how doing this work has impacted you personally?
This is a really good start to your essay. I would recommend focusing a little more on why you volunteer. Why is this so important that it is the subject of your essay?
Hi,
I like your essay but you can definitely make it more precise. You take up space and lose a lot of meaning in the clutter.
I volunteer at the Sunrise Assisted Living home, a home for the elderly and a refuge for Alzheimer's patience. I volunteer here every Saturday for 2 to 3 hours. I conducted an art class where I made small crafts with the residents.
Maybe you can tell us what you've learned from doing this or what it means to you? Good luck!
I like your essay but you can definitely make it more precise. You take up space and lose a lot of meaning in the clutter.
I volunteer at the Sunrise Assisted Living home, a home for the elderly and a refuge for Alzheimer's patience. I volunteer here every Saturday for 2 to 3 hours. I conducted an art class where I made small crafts with the residents.
Maybe you can tell us what you've learned from doing this or what it means to you? Good luck!
forgot to include the prompt :
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer, 1000 character maximum).
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer, 1000 character maximum).
This is a good essay, and a good subject.
But like sidbush said, i would work on how it impacted you personally
But like sidbush said, i would work on how it impacted you personally