What life goals will Purdue help you to achieve--and how? (Respond in 100 words or fewer.)
Contemplating upon my college experience, I envision myself taking risks and opening my mind up to new ideas and opportunities. Offering more than 850 student organizations, and being ranked as having the second-largest international-student population, Purdue University will provide me with the diversity and experiences to fulfill my goals. My encounters with people of varied backgrounds will not only help me to learn of new cultures and ideas, but these encounters will ultimately help me to communicate effectively with anyone despite their varied background.
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Please Edit my essay and check for content especially.
Contemplating upon my college experience, I envision myself taking risks and opening my mind up to new ideas and opportunities. Offering more than 850 student organizations, and being ranked as having the second-largest international-student population, Purdue University will provide me with the diversity and experiences to fulfill my goals. My encounters with people of varied backgrounds will not only help me to learn of new cultures and ideas, but these encounters will ultimately help me to communicate effectively with anyone despite their varied background.
(84/100 words)
Please Edit my essay and check for content especially.