Technology can only changes our traditions not to destroy our traditional values

It is no doubt that the every technology have own benefits and drawbacks. It is often argued that when a country develops its technology, people loss our customs, traditions and cultures but I think that technology is more useful in our life. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments and after that give my opinion.

First of all, I will explain some negative sides of technology and how effected to our traditions. The development of technology should learn more new things. In contrast, people cannot touch with history because they always want to new. For example, children are become more dependent on technology so that they do not learn our traditional values and aspects.

We turn to other sides of technology is their more advantages than disadvantages. Technology can change our lifestyles and make better than we live in present. We know that many people die causes of some dangerous diseases in the world so at that time, the development of medical services are very useful. Likewise, technology should only restrict our poverty and other problems in our life.

In conclusion, my own personal belief that technology can only changes and modifies our traditions not to destroy our traditional values. They have more the advantages outweigh than the disadvantages. They can make our life more comfort, safe and happier.

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It is better if you express your opinion at this point before concluding your introduction. Then it is easy for you to justify why you hold that opinion in the body paragraphs by giving reasons and examples. This sentence sounds a bit vague and doesn't really contribute to your flow of ideas.


children are becoming/ children become

There is no doubt that


technology has both benefits and drawbacks.


technological development leads to the loss of customs, traditions and cultures.


You can start a new sentence from here.


how they affect.


This sentence makes no sense. What do you mean by "learn more new things"?



This has grammatical issues.
On the other hand, people can derive huge benefits from technology.


Technology plays an important role in bettering people's lives.


because of


helps


I believe


You didn't mention it clearly in your essay.
Your essay is too short. This task 2 essay should include at least 250 words. Also, it would be better if you could pay attention to your grammar.

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out.
it is testimony to the fact that when a country fabricated its foremost technologies under the pretext of development it had vanished its utmost customs,rule and laws which were designed for betterment of people.Modern technology and development is no doubt is the need of the time and we must focus upon these development with a view to avail our of the opportunities which are being used in other developing countries. Customs tradition and primitive act are the manifestation of our past such as saying salam, wearing sindhi cap on head and washing hand after eating meal and etc. in order to keep these custom intact, we must utilize these customs in our daily live and uphold the gift of our forefather.

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out.
it is testimony to the fact that when a country fabricated its foremost technologies under the pretext of development it had vanished its utmost customs,rule and laws which were designed for betterment of people.Modern technology and development is no doubt is the need of the time and we must focus upon these development with a view to avail our of the opportunities which are being used in other developing countries. Customs tradition and primitive act are the manifestation of our past such as saying salam, wearing sindhi cap on head and washing hand after eating meal and etc. in order to keep these custom intact, we must utilize these customs in our daily live and uphold the gift of our forefather