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Jhe_aR28 1 / -  
Oct 8, 2012   #1
can you help me correct my grammar im not totally Good in English... hope you can help me or re arrange or correct my essay ^^ plss help me here it is

TELL ME ABOUT YOUR SELF:

My name is Ryan B. Cuizon Jr. I live in Ph.5 Bagong Silang Caloocan City. I graduated in S.T.I College of Novaliches in the course of DIploma in Computer and Electronics Technology, during my studies i learned more about computers histories and how it helps the people in daily life. I actually learned the skills of Computer Technician when i goes in my On the Job Training in Manila Standard Today a News paper Company were in their are lots of computer problems where were going to fix, like computer reformatting, diagnosing, fixing utp cables, networking and some data entry, i really enjoy my OJT. And i also taked an vocational course namely PC Operation were i trained to become a DATA encoder. I enjoy this course because after 3 months i can type 45 to 50 word per minute in correct handling position and i am also computer literate because that is part of the course become literate in the computer. My strength is my knowledge and skill i obtained in my studies and experience in my life. My goalis to finished my 4 years course, actually after i finished my vocational course i proceed my studies in computer engineering and it credited what i finished that is why im 3rd year irregular student but i stop because of financial problem and i need to help my parents too. I know its hard but there is nothing impossible in God trust him and he will guide you in the right way...

sorry for my grammar i dnt know what to do i know my grammar is wrong but your free to rearranged or correct my essay...

* im computer technician - i can reformat P.C's
* computer literate - i can type 40 to 50 WPM word per minute in correct handling position and can operate Microsoft office applications such as word,power point, exell

*i am the only child, my mother is a elementary teacher and my father is a driver.
*im 22 Yrs old and born in CHINESE GENERAL HOSPITAL.
*my hobby is watching T.V, Surfing in my Computer, and my sport is TABLE TENNIS. i love to play table tennis coz that is my sport when i was in high school.

*im loyal and hard working. having a good attitude and long patients.

FEEL FREE TO CORRECT ME... that is my personal background... you can add this. sorry i dnt know how to add them in a correct word... hope you can help me... thanks...

Jennyflower81 - / 674  
Oct 8, 2012   #2
My name is Ryan B. Cuizon Jr. and I live in Ph.5 Bagong Silang Caloocan City. I graduated infrom S.T.I College of Novaliches in the course ofwith a Diploma in Computer and Electronics Technology.during my studiesThrough this education, i learned more about computer history and how it helps the people in daily life. I actually learned the skills of a Computer Technician when i goes in myperformed On the Job Training in Manila.My OJT was at Standard Today, a News paper Company were in their arewhich had lots of computer problems.where were going toThere were many things to fix, like computer reformatting, diagnosing, fixing uprepairing cables, networking, and some data entry. i really enjoyed my OJT. And iAlso,takedI took a vocational course named PC Operation,werein which i trained to become a DATA encoder. I enjoy this course, because after 3 months i canlearned to type 45 to 50 word per minute in correct hand position.and i am also computer literate because that isPart of the course taught mebecome literate in the computer literacy. My strength isskills are based on my knowledge,and skill i obtained in my studieseducation, and life experience.in my life. My goal i s to finish my 4 year degree , actually after i finish my vocational course. i proceed my studies in computer engineering and it credited what i finished that is why im 3rd year irregular student but i stop because of financial problem and i need to help my parents too. I know its hard but there is nothing impossible in God trust him and he will guide you in the right way...

You may want to work on the last few sentences, they are a bit confusing. i hope this helps! Good luck with your studies.


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