I was leaving my tedious life for Brazil to begin a journey that would change my whole perspective on life.
This sounds a bit too abstract - you are leaving where?
My high school performance didn't enable me to peruse my goals because during high school it took me a long time
long time to realize my full potential.
My high school performance didn't enable me to peruse my goals because during high school it took me a long time long time to realize my full potential. I struggled with a reading disability. I thought I wasn't good enough. My lack of confidence contributed to my lack of motivation. I received bad grades as a result.
I think you need to attend this part again. Begin with your reading disability and tell them what was the reason. It is an important thing for them to know.