IamChristinaY 1 / 2 Aug 5, 2012 #1How do you expect your education at The Art Institute of California - Hollywood to help you attain your career goals?My career goals are to start a thriving in photography and to receive the best education that I can. In the next three to four years I would like to be done with my bachelor's degree, so that I can be a portrait, magazine, and, or wedding photographer . I want to be able to take better shots, learn more about the lighting and have a good team by my side. I would like to be earning a salary that I can live off and still have enough money to visit my family around the country. I want a career that will further my artistic abilities; while exploring my creative side in art, which I have never been able to do in any other filed. It is something that I have always had a passion for, I love taking photos of random things and people. I have lived all around the world and have been able to experience different places and take pictures. I want to be able to bring out the joy in people's lives. In the end I think it would be one of the best careers for me to be in.
co11apse 5 / 16 Aug 5, 2012 #2In the end, I think it would be one of the best careers for me to be in - you need a comma here
edladue 1 / 5 Aug 5, 2012 #3In the first sentence, start a thriving should just be start thriving; remove the a.Also, you wrote filed instead of field.Make sure to check for grammatical errors, other than that, it sounds fine.
houshina 2 / 4 Aug 6, 2012 #4have lived all around the world and have been able to experience different places and take pictures.I think it's a little awkward to say have lived. Just use have travelled