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Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are?
I am a curious person. I am dedicated and have a thirst for knowledge. Now curiosity at times has a negative connotation -- after all, it did kill the cat didn't it? But it is what killed the cat that made me stronger. So how does curiosity make me the person that I am? It pushes me to want to know the unknown, to want to do the inexperienced, and to always want more. With that being said I think my trip to Europe is the perfect example of where my inquisitive nature takes me.
From a young age I have always dreamed that one day I will travel the world by myself. As a daughter of conservative parents who live in a judgmental society I was aware that this would be a challenge. But I did not despair, because I knew that my persistent nature will find a way --and so it did. To my joy, when I hit 18 my dream transformed into a trip to France. Taking advantage of this opportunity, I decided to live in France for a couple of months. After all, where better to learn my third language than its origins? I chose to study French in a city named Biarritz located in the south. I did so because I knew that little spoke English there and so I would have to adapt quickly in order to live. I also enjoyed its close proximity to Spain because I knew that I would take advantage of it.
At first living in France was extremely difficult, the language barrier made everyday tasks near impossible. But it was not too long before it became my second home. On the weekdays, I would study by day and explore Biarritz and neighboring towns by night. On the weekends I would take the bus or train and go on little adventures to unknown territories. Some of my adventures lead me to Paris, where I met the Monalisa in the Louvre, and climbed the stairs of the Eiffel tour. To Eze where I learnt how some of my favorite perfumes, such as Coco Chanel, is made-- and even made my very own. Other adventures lead me to Pamplona, Spain where I ran with the bulls and finally discovered the secret behind their hot chocolate. And the Pyrenees, where I tried white water rafting and jumped off a 40 feet cliff into the river.
Curiosity, it makes me who I am, and who I aspire to be; an inquisitive, adventurous, and social soul. I am always up for a challenge. I am appreciative of what I have, yet will take advantage of every opportunity given to me. Curiosity makes me who I am; because while I may not have 9 lives, I intend to live the one I have to the fullest.
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are?
I am a curious person. I am dedicated and have a thirst for knowledge. Now curiosity at times has a negative connotation -- after all, it did kill the cat didn't it? But it is what killed the cat that made me stronger. So how does curiosity make me the person that I am? It pushes me to want to know the unknown, to want to do the inexperienced, and to always want more. With that being said I think my trip to Europe is the perfect example of where my inquisitive nature takes me.
From a young age I have always dreamed that one day I will travel the world by myself. As a daughter of conservative parents who live in a judgmental society I was aware that this would be a challenge. But I did not despair, because I knew that my persistent nature will find a way --and so it did. To my joy, when I hit 18 my dream transformed into a trip to France. Taking advantage of this opportunity, I decided to live in France for a couple of months. After all, where better to learn my third language than its origins? I chose to study French in a city named Biarritz located in the south. I did so because I knew that little spoke English there and so I would have to adapt quickly in order to live. I also enjoyed its close proximity to Spain because I knew that I would take advantage of it.
At first living in France was extremely difficult, the language barrier made everyday tasks near impossible. But it was not too long before it became my second home. On the weekdays, I would study by day and explore Biarritz and neighboring towns by night. On the weekends I would take the bus or train and go on little adventures to unknown territories. Some of my adventures lead me to Paris, where I met the Monalisa in the Louvre, and climbed the stairs of the Eiffel tour. To Eze where I learnt how some of my favorite perfumes, such as Coco Chanel, is made-- and even made my very own. Other adventures lead me to Pamplona, Spain where I ran with the bulls and finally discovered the secret behind their hot chocolate. And the Pyrenees, where I tried white water rafting and jumped off a 40 feet cliff into the river.
Curiosity, it makes me who I am, and who I aspire to be; an inquisitive, adventurous, and social soul. I am always up for a challenge. I am appreciative of what I have, yet will take advantage of every opportunity given to me. Curiosity makes me who I am; because while I may not have 9 lives, I intend to live the one I have to the fullest.