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Thoughts of studying abroad were a big blow to me. I was always scared away by its expensive nature and it racial discrimination. As a result I resolved from studying abroad. However, my meeting St Olaf College a catholic school as changed my perception I had about foreign colleges. It has rather increase my love to study abroad to be able to exploit my hidden talent to the best of my ability.
I didn't choose this school because of the glory of this school or anything of that sort chose this school mainly because of the that u realized this school gives financial assistance or aid to international students like me, who probably cant afford college fees but have an indebt desire to be given a chance to be able to do what they do best in education.
Secondly, I realized that all sects or different cultural backgrounds are given no importance in school. In order words, I chose this college because cultural diversity is not considered in this college. People do what they can do best in a peaceful atmosphere without fear of being racially discriminated this enable anyone realize his or her full potentials.
Thirdly, I realized that most catholic institution are accredited for high discipline and some form of strictness which enables its student to learn hard and also become disciplined. This fact is very true about catholic schools because way back in my home country, I attended a catholic senior high school. In my country catholic schools are noted for discipline and high moral standard which keeps its students in uprightness, for the good of all. That's why I chose this school
Thoughts of studying abroad were a big blow to me. I was always scared away by its expensive nature and it racial discrimination. As a result I resolved from studying abroad. However, my meeting St Olaf College a catholic school as changed my perception I had about foreign colleges. It has rather increase my love to study abroad to be able to exploit my hidden talent to the best of my ability.
I didn't choose this school because of the glory of this school or anything of that sort chose this school mainly because of the that u realized this school gives financial assistance or aid to international students like me, who probably cant afford college fees but have an indebt desire to be given a chance to be able to do what they do best in education.
Secondly, I realized that all sects or different cultural backgrounds are given no importance in school. In order words, I chose this college because cultural diversity is not considered in this college. People do what they can do best in a peaceful atmosphere without fear of being racially discriminated this enable anyone realize his or her full potentials.
Thirdly, I realized that most catholic institution are accredited for high discipline and some form of strictness which enables its student to learn hard and also become disciplined. This fact is very true about catholic schools because way back in my home country, I attended a catholic senior high school. In my country catholic schools are noted for discipline and high moral standard which keeps its students in uprightness, for the good of all. That's why I chose this school