Tufts University paraphernalia, should i keep going for this... WHY TUFTS

I really want Tufts University paraphernalia.
Backpack: To take me through the globally focused education and study abroad opportunities--the gate way to the international career I dream of.
Sweatshirt: A rare piece of uniformity found in the intensely globally and interest diverse student population.
ID Card: The key to the city of boston where internships await.

ignore the actual content. assess the idea please!

I like your idea, its really original, and I it will make you stand out.

I see what you are doing; this is a nice idea. However, you need a clever way to justify wanting the paraphernalia. You need a great sentence that asserts, " I am interested in Tufts University for its excellent paraphernalia. (here the reader says, "What?! That is not a good reason." But then you explain that the paraphernalia represents ________, _________, and _________. That will be your thesis sentence, and then for eac idea you listed, write a body paragraph. Then, the conclusion will thoughtfully reflect on the whole notion of going their for the paraphernalia. Very creative!