>>Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer)<<
It was during my junior year at Cairo's American International School that I joined 80 volunteers from different private schools to stage an AISforEgypt event for the benefit of 200 underprivileged Egyptian children.
This is when I met Hossam, a naive 12 year old boy who worked in a farm to help provide for his single mother and younger sister. I shall never forget how, during lunch, Hossam looked at his plate with an expression of disbelief. It was his first time to eat meat!
At day's end Hossam was a happier child and I much the wiser. The product of a sheltered high-end gated community I took it for granted that meat and other such staples were a common sight on everyone's lunch table.
That fated day was my initiation to the world of haves and have-nots. Hossam had changed my life... for the better.
<<thats my response to the above statement. I need more editing to make this perfect for admissions. I went through 6 drafts to minimize my work and make it 150 words or fewer so please give this a lot of attention. thank you>>>
It was during my junior year at Cairo's American International School that I joined 80 volunteers from different private schools to stage an AISforEgypt event for the benefit of 200 underprivileged Egyptian children.
This is when I met Hossam, a naive 12 year old boy who worked in a farm to help provide for his single mother and younger sister. I shall never forget how, during lunch, Hossam looked at his plate with an expression of disbelief. It was his first time to eat meat!
At day's end Hossam was a happier child and I much the wiser. The product of a sheltered high-end gated community I took it for granted that meat and other such staples were a common sight on everyone's lunch table.
That fated day was my initiation to the world of haves and have-nots. Hossam had changed my life... for the better.
<<thats my response to the above statement. I need more editing to make this perfect for admissions. I went through 6 drafts to minimize my work and make it 150 words or fewer so please give this a lot of attention. thank you>>>