How and Why: understanding scientific findings

When I was a kid,my questions were always based on ''How and Why ''.How to aeroplanes fly? Why are they faster than cars? Why does electricity travel in a fraction of second from transmission station to us? etc etc.I was in a hunger of scientific findings and lucky enough there were always people to help me.I came to know about Aerofoil and Aerodynamics as a whole which gave me little knowledge on how aeroplanes fly.Also I realised that its the transfer of momentum and vibration of numerous electrons in the transmission cables that made electric current to travel so fast.These electrons vibrate with a high frequency and hence transfer their vibration and momentum to the neighbouring electron fast and nearly to the speed of lights,thats why electricity travels so fast.The 'How and Why'' helped me to get insight knowledge and interest about science.They also helped me to understands and know some scientific findings.But much more they always leave me with the hunger to Discover more ,learn what I dont know and search for more knowledge,and later on Apply these results on the development of Science and Technology on my country.Thats why,I would real like to be placed on either Computer Science course,Telecommunication Engineering course,Engineering and Economics course or any Electronic science course at one of your esteemed College.

That is why I am (extremely) eager to be enrolled in ...

@ CathyThank you
I have doubt about the first sentence,its like I was talking about my childhood only and not now.I think they are more interested on my present being.. So, would I be wrong if I make the first statement this way ''

My questions are always based on how and why.As a kid I would asks 'How do Aeroplanes fly .... ''
> then I would talk all that follows

Would it be bad if I pose questions thats strikes me now? '' How were some electronics devices made and how they work,especialy the one that use or have internet access like computer,mobile phones etc etc ..

Actualy,I'm real amazed on how I can write something here and you people right there can see it without any problem provided that you have access to internet.The mechanism involved etc etc ..

When I was a kid, my questions were always based on ''How and Why''; How to airplanes fly?

I was in a hunger of scientific findings and luckily,enough there were always people to help me.

I came to know about Aerofoil and Aerodynamics as a whole, which gave me a little knowledge on how airplanes fly.

Also I realized that its the transfer...

... transfer their vibration and momentum to the neighbouring electron nearly at the speed of light. Thats why electricity travels so fast!

...the hunger to d iscover more, l earn what I don't know and search for more knowledge, a nd later on a pply these results on the development of Science and Technology in my country.

That's why, I would really like to be placed in either Computer Science course, T elecommunication Engineering course,Engineering and Economics course or any Electronic science course at one of your esteemed College.

Thank you @ Susan,can you please say anything on the question that I posed to Cathy?

I think it would be fine to pose those questions, they show your passion for learning and also that you are a unique and interesting writer.

Good luck in school!

:)

I think your essay's beginning is excellent. By telling your dream of your childhood, readers could see how eager you are to learn this kind of knowledge and how enthusiastic you are to it ,as it has been being you dream since you are a child.


According to my experiences, I think as long as you express your eagerness for this subject sincerely, the readers eventually will be touched by your words.