I have my ups and downs; Celebrate your nerdy side

Celebrate your nerdy side

I have my ups and downs, my moments of true glory, moments of failure and moments of silence. I am sure that knowledge is the only key to progress and that dreams are the catalysts of development. I know that education is the only way to my success and I know that if someone wants to achieve his goals than he must devote himself to work harder. I think that you should never regret something you did because in the end, it makes you who you are. I believe that in order to improve the world you should start from yourself, so here I am, living with a dream, I want to become a great physician and I am trying to do my best in the way to achieve it.

There are two words that can describe me the best: talented and hard-working. Physics was always an important part of my life; I managed to become one of the best physics students in my country. I participated in a lot of physics Olympiads and I am the member of Romanian Physics Olympic Team, the participation at the International Physics Olympiad 2013 was for sure my most important and enjoyable experience, I felt very comfortable surrounded by a lot of intelligent students. I enjoy solving physics problems and I love the feeling you get after finishing a very complicated and complex task. I try to do my best in every domain; I follow my dreams with a lot of passion and dedication. I work hard and I play hard, so am I a nerd?

You used good word choice by using "catalysts", "passion", "dedication", and "domain". You also stated how achieving something is very important to you, and that shows you are proud of yourself. I really liked your beginning of the first paragraph.

i feel like you should tell a story about what you experienced in the olympiad and then add how that showed your love in physics

ya, i know but i only have 250 words, thanks
maybe i should rewrite some paragraphs

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