USC supplement:describe a time where I have to collaborate to accomplish more than I could by myself

describe a time where you have to collaborate to accomplish more than you could by myself

The League of Overseas Students in Henan

In early 2016, I founded League of Overseas Students in Henan(LOSH), which serves as an alumni platform for students who study abroad to exchange information. Firstly, I started from Wechat public platform by posting some articles about the experiences of studying abroad, which received big echo. Then I worked as a chief editor for a magazine for overseas students, so I have lots of stories and articles to share from the everyday feedbacks to constantly upgrades the platform.

However, only sharing daily articles is far from enough. I needed to contact with overseas students who came from Henan across the world to join the alumni system, and to collect the worldwide studying abroad information. In that case, I thought there was no way I could complete the job efficiently on my own, so I invited five of my friends who have different talents to develop LOSH together with me. I'm in charge of collecting and posting students' articles every day, and I'm good at it. Two teammates organizes parties and other activities to gather alumni together. Another two upgrades important news daily. One guy works as a HR for recruiting other students who want join us. Apart from focusing on our own part of work, we all care about the sustainable development of LOSH, so we hold weekly meetings to propose suggestions for further development.

With the collaboration between me and my group members, LOSH expands rapidly. Over ten thousand overseas students in and out of Henan have joined us.

Please give me some suggestions.

@Bennyoooo

Hi Benny,

I think you can mention your goals before and after working in a team in figures to give the reader clear views of the group achievement, for example 100 to 1000 subscribers or increase in comments, shares, etc. I don't use Wechat so I don't know the platform features.

Hope my comment helps.

Jiang, what is the purpose of your organization or online magazine? Aside from the name of the organization, you should also qualify its importance to the prompt by describing the reason behind the project. What is the objective? Has that objective been achieved through constant collaboration or is this still an ongoing or never ending project? The reason I ask is because you need to provide a reason for the collaboration that your initiated in the group. What has been accomplished through the collaboration so far? Aside from being able to keep the website online? Explain the importance of the collaboration beyond just being able to help you keep the site online and the information updated. That is the missing link in this essay that, when provided, should make the essay ready for use because it will be more prompt adherent.