How did you first hear about Franklin and Marshall and why did you choose to apply?
I first heard about Franklin and Marshall when my cousin enrolled at the College in around 2002. At that time, I was nowhere near thinking about looking for colleges for myself, so the name was quickly pushed to the back of my mind. Since then, my cousin and several friends have graduated from Franklin and Marshall. All of them loved their experiences there. Needless to say, when I was finally ready to start searching for colleges to...
I am certain that both Benjamin Franklin and John Marshall are incredibly interesting men, but given the choice, I would choose to Franklin to be my dinner companioninvite Franklin to be my dinner partner. Though he is more famous for his inventions and scientific investigations, I would enjoy talking to him about newspapers and the media. He was a newspaper editor and publisher, and I would love to pick his brain for any suggestions he has for a budding journalist. Of course, any advice from him would need to be adapted to the modern world where the art of print journalism seems to be dying out, but a conversation with him about the topic would nonetheless be very informative. It would be interesting to know what he thinks of today's popular media, including blogs, tweets, and even CNN's iReport, all of which allow ordinary people to become reporters and social activists. Would he see these phenomena as harmful to traditional media like newspapers, or a natural step in the development of interactions between society and media? Once all the talking is out of the way, I think that it would be quite fun to play some guitar with him, as I have read that he was an accomplished guitarist. He could teach me a favourite song of his, and I could teach him one of mine, perhaps Green Day's classic "Good Riddance (Time of Your Life)".
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Some help with a concluding sentence would be awesome.
I first heard about Franklin and Marshall when my cousin enrolled at the College in around 2002. At that time, I was nowhere near thinking about looking for colleges for myself, so the name was quickly pushed to the back of my mind. Since then, my cousin and several friends have graduated from Franklin and Marshall. All of them loved their experiences there. Needless to say, when I was finally ready to start searching for colleges to...
I am certain that both Benjamin Franklin and John Marshall are incredibly interesting men, but given the choice, I would choose to Franklin to be my dinner companioninvite Franklin to be my dinner partner. Though he is more famous for his inventions and scientific investigations, I would enjoy talking to him about newspapers and the media. He was a newspaper editor and publisher, and I would love to pick his brain for any suggestions he has for a budding journalist. Of course, any advice from him would need to be adapted to the modern world where the art of print journalism seems to be dying out, but a conversation with him about the topic would nonetheless be very informative. It would be interesting to know what he thinks of today's popular media, including blogs, tweets, and even CNN's iReport, all of which allow ordinary people to become reporters and social activists. Would he see these phenomena as harmful to traditional media like newspapers, or a natural step in the development of interactions between society and media? Once all the talking is out of the way, I think that it would be quite fun to play some guitar with him, as I have read that he was an accomplished guitarist. He could teach me a favourite song of his, and I could teach him one of mine, perhaps Green Day's classic "Good Riddance (Time of Your Life)".
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Some help with a concluding sentence would be awesome.