Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences for Common App
I would really appreciate some feedback if it made sense adn answered the prompt. Also any grammar mistakes. It has to be 150 words adn I am 50 words above, but i don't know what to cut out. thank you!
"Two hotdogs and one sausage!" I shout out and then rush past the other waiters to get my customer's order. I remember when I first started volunteering here at the 4-H Fair two summers ago. I heard about it from my school's Key Club and was told I would be a waitress. Having no experience, I was very nervous with a million thoughts racing my mind. "What if I get the order wrong?" Will I remember where the hotdog buns are?"
However I put on a confident smile and each new order taught me good work habits.
Now, my second summer here, my charisma and leadership skills allowed me more important roles. I was put in charge to train the new volunteers, check on the supplies, and I was also promoted to work at the sausage stand.
Grease splatters on my face as I wait next to the stove for the hotdogs.
It is rush hour with many waiting customers. Still none of the chaos seems to hold me back. Instead it fuels my passion and enthusiasm to work harder, lead and help the others get our job done. I am looking forward to next summer.
"Here is your order ma'am. Have a nice day."
P.S. I wanted to add that the money raised was being donated to Children's Specialized Hospital, but not sure where to put that or if I should put it at all. Thank you!
I would really appreciate some feedback if it made sense adn answered the prompt. Also any grammar mistakes. It has to be 150 words adn I am 50 words above, but i don't know what to cut out. thank you!
"Two hotdogs and one sausage!" I shout out and then rush past the other waiters to get my customer's order. I remember when I first started volunteering here at the 4-H Fair two summers ago. I heard about it from my school's Key Club and was told I would be a waitress. Having no experience, I was very nervous with a million thoughts racing my mind. "What if I get the order wrong?" Will I remember where the hotdog buns are?"
However I put on a confident smile and each new order taught me good work habits.
Now, my second summer here, my charisma and leadership skills allowed me more important roles. I was put in charge to train the new volunteers, check on the supplies, and I was also promoted to work at the sausage stand.
Grease splatters on my face as I wait next to the stove for the hotdogs.
It is rush hour with many waiting customers. Still none of the chaos seems to hold me back. Instead it fuels my passion and enthusiasm to work harder, lead and help the others get our job done. I am looking forward to next summer.
"Here is your order ma'am. Have a nice day."
P.S. I wanted to add that the money raised was being donated to Children's Specialized Hospital, but not sure where to put that or if I should put it at all. Thank you!