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Question: In its mission statement, the UIC Honors College is described as a community of scholars whose goal is to enrich the education experience of undergraduates and allow the faculty and students of all disciplines to interact in teaching, learning and research. Please tell us "How can you contribute to the Honors College community?" What benefits do you expect in return? (400-500 words)
My mother was a woman with a good work ethnic and great contributor to those in her community. She had taught me to be the same as her and to always help humanity. As a senior at Carl Sandburg High School, I have helped the community in many ways; as a college student, I will help contribute to the UIC Honors College Program in countless ways.
In high school, I have been a math tutor for two years. Inducted for my commitment to mathematics, I am passionate of assisting peers with different levels of math from Algebra 1 all the way up to Calculus. Most of my friends considered me as an impressive tutor who came with effective tips and tricks. Specifically, I remember a freshman coming to my class saying that he is failing Algebra. I started to tutor him usually three times a week. I had to teach him step by step so he could understand the material. Fortunately, his grade started improving and was receiving a C in his class. He told me that I taught properly and made the content clear and concise. I want to continue tutoring at UIC and help pupils who struggle with math. I know that I will make the material easy, clear, fun, and less stressful for many taking math courses at UIC.
One of my huge contributions will be my commitment to volunteerism. As a high school student, I volunteered at the Orland Park Public Library as well as Palos Heights Community Hospital. I was a computer volunteer assistant who would help patrons with print jobs, taking printing money, and help those who had trouble using the Internet. I also helped senior citizens with their cell phones. The librarian would book an appointment and I would be ready to teach the elderly how to use their phone effectively and properly as well as what apps they should download. At eh hospital, I am a sterile supply worker and a courier. I transport food trays and medical equipment to departments that need those things. I have contributed over 400 hours of service; I know that I am committed to helping others. At UIC, I plan on making the university a warm, welcoming place for any student or even civilian. I want to work with other pupils in order to help humanity as well as make the university a safe, memorable place.
As I help the university by volunteering and tutoring, I hope that the university helps me become an excellent physician with a strong personality and foundation. I want to receive a valuable education that will help build my skills toward becoming a doctor. The more I learn, the more I can apply to my profession. In addition, I would appreciate the honors program to help get admitted into UIC Medical School. I want to learn tips and get recommendations so I can increase my chances of getting into their med school. I am exuberant to join the honors program
Question: In its mission statement, the UIC Honors College is described as a community of scholars whose goal is to enrich the education experience of undergraduates and allow the faculty and students of all disciplines to interact in teaching, learning and research. Please tell us "How can you contribute to the Honors College community?" What benefits do you expect in return? (400-500 words)
My mother was a woman with a good work ethnic and great contributor to those in her community. She had taught me to be the same as her and to always help humanity. As a senior at Carl Sandburg High School, I have helped the community in many ways; as a college student, I will help contribute to the UIC Honors College Program in countless ways.
In high school, I have been a math tutor for two years. Inducted for my commitment to mathematics, I am passionate of assisting peers with different levels of math from Algebra 1 all the way up to Calculus. Most of my friends considered me as an impressive tutor who came with effective tips and tricks. Specifically, I remember a freshman coming to my class saying that he is failing Algebra. I started to tutor him usually three times a week. I had to teach him step by step so he could understand the material. Fortunately, his grade started improving and was receiving a C in his class. He told me that I taught properly and made the content clear and concise. I want to continue tutoring at UIC and help pupils who struggle with math. I know that I will make the material easy, clear, fun, and less stressful for many taking math courses at UIC.
One of my huge contributions will be my commitment to volunteerism. As a high school student, I volunteered at the Orland Park Public Library as well as Palos Heights Community Hospital. I was a computer volunteer assistant who would help patrons with print jobs, taking printing money, and help those who had trouble using the Internet. I also helped senior citizens with their cell phones. The librarian would book an appointment and I would be ready to teach the elderly how to use their phone effectively and properly as well as what apps they should download. At eh hospital, I am a sterile supply worker and a courier. I transport food trays and medical equipment to departments that need those things. I have contributed over 400 hours of service; I know that I am committed to helping others. At UIC, I plan on making the university a warm, welcoming place for any student or even civilian. I want to work with other pupils in order to help humanity as well as make the university a safe, memorable place.
As I help the university by volunteering and tutoring, I hope that the university helps me become an excellent physician with a strong personality and foundation. I want to receive a valuable education that will help build my skills toward becoming a doctor. The more I learn, the more I can apply to my profession. In addition, I would appreciate the honors program to help get admitted into UIC Medical School. I want to learn tips and get recommendations so I can increase my chances of getting into their med school. I am exuberant to join the honors program