The prompt is what are five interesting or unqiue things about yourself.
The word limit is 250, and I am over by 10! So, please tell don't tell me to add more! I just want your opinions!
"A wannabe millionaire, tuba enthusiast, and car fanatic, I may be one of the most interesting combination of qualities and interests that has graced the face of this Earth. Not really of course, as I don't want to get too arrogant about myself. I don't know where my humble side of personality comes from, but I feel that being arrogant is a sin in someway or form. Now I shall write this little self-reflection paragraph on five, actually four because I gave one above, "unique" things about myself. People are very skeptical when I tell them this, but I never missed a day of school in my life. No, I didn't plan to receive a perfect attendance award year after year. And, I actually enjoy going to school. I'd rather be in school all day then aimlessly stare at four walls of my room for hours. While attending school, I acquired a hobby I really liked. I started playing tuba in 6th grade and I loved it so much that I asked my parents to buy me one. In return, I made the District Band every year, and I have to say it's the best clunk of metal I own, other than my car. This one is a cliché but I aspire to be a millionaire before the age of thirty. I believe that I can accomplish this through the use of a savings account I opened when I was only sixteen. The last one is unique because out of millions of college students, I'm not a college student yet."
Also, I feel like I get off track towards the end...How should I replace "This one is a cliché but ..."? and tell me if my facts are interesting or not!
The word limit is 250, and I am over by 10! So, please tell don't tell me to add more! I just want your opinions!
"A wannabe millionaire, tuba enthusiast, and car fanatic, I may be one of the most interesting combination of qualities and interests that has graced the face of this Earth. Not really of course, as I don't want to get too arrogant about myself. I don't know where my humble side of personality comes from, but I feel that being arrogant is a sin in someway or form. Now I shall write this little self-reflection paragraph on five, actually four because I gave one above, "unique" things about myself. People are very skeptical when I tell them this, but I never missed a day of school in my life. No, I didn't plan to receive a perfect attendance award year after year. And, I actually enjoy going to school. I'd rather be in school all day then aimlessly stare at four walls of my room for hours. While attending school, I acquired a hobby I really liked. I started playing tuba in 6th grade and I loved it so much that I asked my parents to buy me one. In return, I made the District Band every year, and I have to say it's the best clunk of metal I own, other than my car. This one is a cliché but I aspire to be a millionaire before the age of thirty. I believe that I can accomplish this through the use of a savings account I opened when I was only sixteen. The last one is unique because out of millions of college students, I'm not a college student yet."
Also, I feel like I get off track towards the end...How should I replace "This one is a cliché but ..."? and tell me if my facts are interesting or not!