Prompt: It is Tuesday, March 14th, year 2028. Please describe the entries in your appointment book for the day
Please read my answer and tell me what I am missing and how I can improve it. I feel that the last part of my answer can use some help but I do not know what I can do to it to make it better. Thank you so much!
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After eating dinner and catching up with the characters in the latest novel that I am reading I grabbed my planner to check what is in store for me tomorrow. I flipped to March 14, 2028 and was surprised to find that I was off from work. I have been working so much lately that my friends and parents have called me a workaholic. It is not because I am a greedy person and want to work so much in order to get money but I sincerely do love what I do. Ever since I saw my cousin Erin walking across the stage at her graduation I knew that I wanted to become a pharmacist. Not only do I get to learn how different medications work but I also get the chance to help others in the process. Through medications I get the opportunity to heal people and make sure that their health is in tip top shape.
Of course, even though I am not working tomorrow I still have a ton of things to do. The first line in my planner says "6:00 A.M. ď Workout at the gym." Even though I dread waking up so early in the morning when I do not have work I try my best to keep myself healthy. I want to live a long a life and be able to tell my grandkids stories of all the things that I have gone through.
After my morning workout my planner says "9:00 A.M. ď Lunch with Heather and Kelli". Even though my friends and I live very different lives and have very busy schedules we make it so that we have breakfast with each other at least once a week. Being together gives us an opportunity to unwind and talk about our life, family, work, and everything else in between.
The next line in my planner says "1:00 P.M. ď Apartment hunting." During pharmacy school I was able to juggle my school work and a part-time job at the same time so I was able to save enough money to rent an apartment all for myself. I have been living here for about four years now and I feel that it is time for a change. Besides living three hours away from my family is not working for me. Growing up my family were the people that molded and shaped me into the person that I am today and I want to be there for them whenever they need help. Therefore when I go apartment shopping tomorrow I am going to look for places that are not that far away from them (but then again not that close either).
Speaking of my family, I quickly jotted down a note for myself reminding me that my parents have called me to ask if I can stop by for dinner at 6:00 P.M. after I am done looking at places. I cannot wait to see them, after a long hectic week it will be nice to spend some time with my parents and little brother. "Ring-ring!" Looking at the caller ID I see that it is my work that is calling me, probably someone calling me to ask if I can take over their shift one day and after answering the phone I was right. Stacy from work wanted me to take her day shift two days from now because she had a doctor's appointment. Thinking about how my family and friends have called me a workaholic I hesitated to say yes but then again I do love working as a pharmacist.
Please read my answer and tell me what I am missing and how I can improve it. I feel that the last part of my answer can use some help but I do not know what I can do to it to make it better. Thank you so much!
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After eating dinner and catching up with the characters in the latest novel that I am reading I grabbed my planner to check what is in store for me tomorrow. I flipped to March 14, 2028 and was surprised to find that I was off from work. I have been working so much lately that my friends and parents have called me a workaholic. It is not because I am a greedy person and want to work so much in order to get money but I sincerely do love what I do. Ever since I saw my cousin Erin walking across the stage at her graduation I knew that I wanted to become a pharmacist. Not only do I get to learn how different medications work but I also get the chance to help others in the process. Through medications I get the opportunity to heal people and make sure that their health is in tip top shape.
Of course, even though I am not working tomorrow I still have a ton of things to do. The first line in my planner says "6:00 A.M. ď Workout at the gym." Even though I dread waking up so early in the morning when I do not have work I try my best to keep myself healthy. I want to live a long a life and be able to tell my grandkids stories of all the things that I have gone through.
After my morning workout my planner says "9:00 A.M. ď Lunch with Heather and Kelli". Even though my friends and I live very different lives and have very busy schedules we make it so that we have breakfast with each other at least once a week. Being together gives us an opportunity to unwind and talk about our life, family, work, and everything else in between.
The next line in my planner says "1:00 P.M. ď Apartment hunting." During pharmacy school I was able to juggle my school work and a part-time job at the same time so I was able to save enough money to rent an apartment all for myself. I have been living here for about four years now and I feel that it is time for a change. Besides living three hours away from my family is not working for me. Growing up my family were the people that molded and shaped me into the person that I am today and I want to be there for them whenever they need help. Therefore when I go apartment shopping tomorrow I am going to look for places that are not that far away from them (but then again not that close either).
Speaking of my family, I quickly jotted down a note for myself reminding me that my parents have called me to ask if I can stop by for dinner at 6:00 P.M. after I am done looking at places. I cannot wait to see them, after a long hectic week it will be nice to spend some time with my parents and little brother. "Ring-ring!" Looking at the caller ID I see that it is my work that is calling me, probably someone calling me to ask if I can take over their shift one day and after answering the phone I was right. Stacy from work wanted me to take her day shift two days from now because she had a doctor's appointment. Thinking about how my family and friends have called me a workaholic I hesitated to say yes but then again I do love working as a pharmacist.