Hello,
I'm transferring from a community college to the University of Michigan to go for a doctorate in mathematics and I'm almost finished with my response to the following prompt:
"Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. (Approximately 250 words)"
I'm having the most difficult time with this one, however.
Here is my response:
"I had a rough time in junior high and the beginning of high school. I focused less on being part of a community, my academics and extracurricular activities and more on trying not to get slammed into lockers and pushed into drugs (it was so bad for one of my friends that he would walk to the bus stop, then to the woods. There he would stay for the 7-hour school day). Consequently I became more of a loner. I tried to keep as low of a profile as I could to avoid that torment.
I don't really come from a specific community except my immediate family. I come from a generally military family: my mom, dad, grandmother (dad's side), grandfather and great grandfather (both mom's side) come from military backgrounds. My parents met in the Air Force while serving in South Korea. I was born in Nellis Air Force Base in 1991, moved to K. I. Sawyer AFB in 1993 and eventually my parents bought a house near my mom's parents in Grand Traverse County, which is where I've resided ever since. They divorced when I was 8 years old, so for about 12 years since then I've been jumping between their homes. I feel lucky that they get along so well. It really made dealing with the divorce an easier process.
Though much of my family has been in the military, my parents never pushed it onto me. They only wanted me to be happy when I grew up. I'm also the first in my immediate family to attend college. During my junior and senior high school years is when I really became involved in academics and extracurricular activities (it helped that I transferred to a school that really pushed academics). I joined the track team my junior year and ended up being the team captain for my senior year in track and cross country. It was also the period where I found my passion: mathematics. I adored it so much that I'm going for a doctorate in it.
I don't come from a wealthy family by any means. I am definitely in the working class. I've been working at least three days every week since my junior year in high school. None of it goes towards paying off my loans. It mostly goes towards gas money, car insurance and food. My parents help me out a little when I'm especially low on funds for gas and food, but not enough that it would be considered support. My mother and stepdad have both recently filed for bankruptcy and my dad lost his job a few months ago. He was just hired to work for a private military contractor where he'll be making 4 times more than what he was as an electrician. However, it's mostly hazard pay. He'll be working in a warzone. "
I have no idea how to end this. Someone help me out?
Thank you!
I'm transferring from a community college to the University of Michigan to go for a doctorate in mathematics and I'm almost finished with my response to the following prompt:
"Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. (Approximately 250 words)"
I'm having the most difficult time with this one, however.
Here is my response:
"I had a rough time in junior high and the beginning of high school. I focused less on being part of a community, my academics and extracurricular activities and more on trying not to get slammed into lockers and pushed into drugs (it was so bad for one of my friends that he would walk to the bus stop, then to the woods. There he would stay for the 7-hour school day). Consequently I became more of a loner. I tried to keep as low of a profile as I could to avoid that torment.
I don't really come from a specific community except my immediate family. I come from a generally military family: my mom, dad, grandmother (dad's side), grandfather and great grandfather (both mom's side) come from military backgrounds. My parents met in the Air Force while serving in South Korea. I was born in Nellis Air Force Base in 1991, moved to K. I. Sawyer AFB in 1993 and eventually my parents bought a house near my mom's parents in Grand Traverse County, which is where I've resided ever since. They divorced when I was 8 years old, so for about 12 years since then I've been jumping between their homes. I feel lucky that they get along so well. It really made dealing with the divorce an easier process.
Though much of my family has been in the military, my parents never pushed it onto me. They only wanted me to be happy when I grew up. I'm also the first in my immediate family to attend college. During my junior and senior high school years is when I really became involved in academics and extracurricular activities (it helped that I transferred to a school that really pushed academics). I joined the track team my junior year and ended up being the team captain for my senior year in track and cross country. It was also the period where I found my passion: mathematics. I adored it so much that I'm going for a doctorate in it.
I don't come from a wealthy family by any means. I am definitely in the working class. I've been working at least three days every week since my junior year in high school. None of it goes towards paying off my loans. It mostly goes towards gas money, car insurance and food. My parents help me out a little when I'm especially low on funds for gas and food, but not enough that it would be considered support. My mother and stepdad have both recently filed for bankruptcy and my dad lost his job a few months ago. He was just hired to work for a private military contractor where he'll be making 4 times more than what he was as an electrician. However, it's mostly hazard pay. He'll be working in a warzone. "
I have no idea how to end this. Someone help me out?
Thank you!