Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you. -Common App- (500 words)
Three SAT's and a few applications and essays in and I am exhausted. I keep trying to believe that I can make the deadline but just that absorbs all my energy and leaves none for the processes themselves. Games seem more and more amusing, but I still want to go to a top quality university. The battle rages on between the loss and the maintenance of it: hope.
The world is currently in a major crisis. Although many might automatically think the economy, I feel that the true crisis at hand is a loss in hope. Because of our hopelessness, we continually fall towards failure. Global warming is also another crisis that brings doom to mind; however, it is due to a feeling of hopelessness among people that nothing absolute is done towards a greener world. If those that truly seek the root of a problem search hard enough, they too will come to the same conclusion. We must subdue this feeling and try hard to work toward our goals.
As I started my senior year in high school, I felt no pressure and was carefree. I knew an impending SAT was coming up but did not think too much about it to keep from accumulating stress. I was also hopeful and felt I would do very well on it. My hope of a good result earned me a 220 point stride.
We started two AP courses for the first time in our school and I had no idea what to expect. It was very rigorous but not much from our standard curriculum. I felt I could manage these demanding courses. I started a study habit and was on my way to success.
When it came time to study for what I thought was my last SAT, maintaining a solid GPA of a 4.0 became harder and harder. I started to feel the perspiration. This was not the end; it became much more elaborate. I found out that I had to write a slew of essays for the colleges that I was applying to, not to mention the endless and confusing applications.
The Common Application was an invaluable reference until I got to the supplements. I felt as if a college needed to ask these questions, why not just do an interview? This ludicrous method of acceptance made me not want any part of it; after all, it seemed impossible. I had started to lose hope.
Just as I had lost my hope, my passionate desire to go to a top quality university motivated me to strive to accomplish the process. Just then, I realized what our problem is and how we can fix it. It may seem obvious that through motivation we can achieve our ambitions; on the other hand, it is not as plain for everyone to see. Until we open our eyes and picture ourselves where we want to be, we can not get there.
Ultimately, I feel that the lack of hope is a serious problem that the whole world faces. If I had not apprehended this philosophy, I could have neither formulated this essay nor been able to finish any of my goals. Hope is what keeps us going and that alone is what I treasure the most.
I currently have 543 words, so I need help in both brevity and grammar.
-Thanks a 1000 in advance.
Three SAT's and a few applications and essays in and I am exhausted. I keep trying to believe that I can make the deadline but just that absorbs all my energy and leaves none for the processes themselves. Games seem more and more amusing, but I still want to go to a top quality university. The battle rages on between the loss and the maintenance of it: hope.
The world is currently in a major crisis. Although many might automatically think the economy, I feel that the true crisis at hand is a loss in hope. Because of our hopelessness, we continually fall towards failure. Global warming is also another crisis that brings doom to mind; however, it is due to a feeling of hopelessness among people that nothing absolute is done towards a greener world. If those that truly seek the root of a problem search hard enough, they too will come to the same conclusion. We must subdue this feeling and try hard to work toward our goals.
As I started my senior year in high school, I felt no pressure and was carefree. I knew an impending SAT was coming up but did not think too much about it to keep from accumulating stress. I was also hopeful and felt I would do very well on it. My hope of a good result earned me a 220 point stride.
We started two AP courses for the first time in our school and I had no idea what to expect. It was very rigorous but not much from our standard curriculum. I felt I could manage these demanding courses. I started a study habit and was on my way to success.
When it came time to study for what I thought was my last SAT, maintaining a solid GPA of a 4.0 became harder and harder. I started to feel the perspiration. This was not the end; it became much more elaborate. I found out that I had to write a slew of essays for the colleges that I was applying to, not to mention the endless and confusing applications.
The Common Application was an invaluable reference until I got to the supplements. I felt as if a college needed to ask these questions, why not just do an interview? This ludicrous method of acceptance made me not want any part of it; after all, it seemed impossible. I had started to lose hope.
Just as I had lost my hope, my passionate desire to go to a top quality university motivated me to strive to accomplish the process. Just then, I realized what our problem is and how we can fix it. It may seem obvious that through motivation we can achieve our ambitions; on the other hand, it is not as plain for everyone to see. Until we open our eyes and picture ourselves where we want to be, we can not get there.
Ultimately, I feel that the lack of hope is a serious problem that the whole world faces. If I had not apprehended this philosophy, I could have neither formulated this essay nor been able to finish any of my goals. Hope is what keeps us going and that alone is what I treasure the most.
I currently have 543 words, so I need help in both brevity and grammar.
-Thanks a 1000 in advance.