I've grown up in a community and school located one hour away from a major city and fifteen minutes from the beach.
I want out though. Though my community...
Overall, the community leans more towards the left but not too much.
Rephrase these parts, because they just don't sound right.
And so, that's why I find the idea funny, that I want to go to a place whose physical traits almost perfectly mirrors my hometown.
What attracts me so much to Stanford are the opportunities that the school offers me in my pursuit of a worldly perspective.
where I will be offered local and international opportunities to experience firsthand not just the national and global problems that exist , but also the dispositions of those intertwined with those troubles.
an amalgam of cultures and lifestyles and undoubtedly a perfect place for me to explore
To explore what? Expand more on this thought.
Stanford's top nationally ranked departments will challenge with courses like "The Marriage Plot" and "Vector Space Optimization." I will gain new knowledge and also critically revaluate previous beliefs and assumptions. Foundations on campus like the Center for Entrepreneurial Studies and the Freeman Spogli Institute for International Studies will then provide me with the ultimate opportunities to utilize my newfound perspectives and learning.
Try not to mention everything you like in Stanford and explain this attraction in a sentence. Try to be more specific about something, and write about it in more details.
Though one could assume that Stanford would be just an exact continuation of my current life because of parallels in surroundings
You are assuming in this phrase that you are already ,lets say, in the university. Instead of this try to explain how will the university change you, in a better way of course.
Hope this helped. You should work on your use of english. Good luck in your applications.