Reflect on something you would like us to know about you that we might not learn from the rest of your application. Could include personal interests. 500 word limit
Excitedly crouched at the starting line, my heart in my stomach and anticipation in the air. Seconds ticked on by when the leader finally called out.
"Ok let's go!"
We kicked our boards and zoomed down the lane. Or should I say that they sped off. I was lagging behind, shocked at how far they've gotten with one push. I watched in dismay as their backs behind smaller and smaller until they completely disappeared.
It was a beautiful Saturday morning and I was skating a lap around Prospect Park, all 526 acres, as part of an all girls skate event. I bought my board only months before and this was my debut into the skating world. I thought I would be able to keep up with everyone but the difference in experience and practice was abundantly clear. However I kept pushing, trying to keep up but pretty soon realized it was futile. They were long gone and I was alone. Rather than give up I toughed it out and skated, and was really glad I did because the journey was exhilarating.
I lived near the park all my life but I never realized how huge and beautiful it was. I rode through different neighborhoods, by people from different cultures, and on different size roads. I passed by wooden sculptures, several stages and huge fountains. As I neared the place that I recognized from my neighborhood, I realized how much I was missing from not branching out and going deep into the park before.
As I neared the meet up place dead last, knee stinging from a fall, and hair dripping with sweat underneath my helmet, I exclaimed with happiness. The other skaters were already chilling, passing around food, and chatting but I couldn't help but laugh and feel accomplished that I did it. I made it. Not long after I sat down I turned to my friend and exclaimed "Let's do that again". He shook his head in laughter and responded "Told you it was fun".
From that trip I've learned to be more sure of myself and trust in myself and balance. I also learned to never give up and to push through even when I fall or am too tired. Although I was way behind, I got to work on my technique and made some new friends on the way. Now I'm an active member of the longboarding community and can keep up when they skate. I even know a few tricks now and am gradually getting better at sliding. This experience has taught me to go out and venture out into new places. Since this event I visited several new places all over Manhattan and Queens, visiting skate shops and meeting new skaters.
[ I was thinking of adding something about how I wanted to continue this in college]
I really need help with this. Any piece of advice or criticism is welcome. Thanks again!!
Excitedly crouched at the starting line, my heart in my stomach and anticipation in the air. Seconds ticked on by when the leader finally called out.
"Ok let's go!"
We kicked our boards and zoomed down the lane. Or should I say that they sped off. I was lagging behind, shocked at how far they've gotten with one push. I watched in dismay as their backs behind smaller and smaller until they completely disappeared.
It was a beautiful Saturday morning and I was skating a lap around Prospect Park, all 526 acres, as part of an all girls skate event. I bought my board only months before and this was my debut into the skating world. I thought I would be able to keep up with everyone but the difference in experience and practice was abundantly clear. However I kept pushing, trying to keep up but pretty soon realized it was futile. They were long gone and I was alone. Rather than give up I toughed it out and skated, and was really glad I did because the journey was exhilarating.
I lived near the park all my life but I never realized how huge and beautiful it was. I rode through different neighborhoods, by people from different cultures, and on different size roads. I passed by wooden sculptures, several stages and huge fountains. As I neared the place that I recognized from my neighborhood, I realized how much I was missing from not branching out and going deep into the park before.
As I neared the meet up place dead last, knee stinging from a fall, and hair dripping with sweat underneath my helmet, I exclaimed with happiness. The other skaters were already chilling, passing around food, and chatting but I couldn't help but laugh and feel accomplished that I did it. I made it. Not long after I sat down I turned to my friend and exclaimed "Let's do that again". He shook his head in laughter and responded "Told you it was fun".
From that trip I've learned to be more sure of myself and trust in myself and balance. I also learned to never give up and to push through even when I fall or am too tired. Although I was way behind, I got to work on my technique and made some new friends on the way. Now I'm an active member of the longboarding community and can keep up when they skate. I even know a few tricks now and am gradually getting better at sliding. This experience has taught me to go out and venture out into new places. Since this event I visited several new places all over Manhattan and Queens, visiting skate shops and meeting new skaters.
[ I was thinking of adding something about how I wanted to continue this in college]
I really need help with this. Any piece of advice or criticism is welcome. Thanks again!!
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